Moving On

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topfanyhae #1 Feb 22, 2014 07:45:13

yeah i know hehe. it's only the first chapter. you should wait for the next chapter it's going to be sweet and well it's a secret

vinarinako #2 Feb 21, 2014 16:38:36

Chapter 1: You should include the emotions that your chsracters are feeling~ c: This is too straight-forward~ Put more words to this~

Anniee #3 Feb 20, 2014 09:15:24

Chapter 1: you should elaborate more :)