Welcome to hell

Description

Hangeng, Siwon and Kibum belong to an underground club run by the infamous Kim Heechul. But Heechul has a dark secret...He’s a vampire. And so are his best workers. When Kyuhyun stumbles upon the club by accident he’s thrown into a secret world he has no idea about. Confused, angry and exhausted, Kyuhyun turns to the only person he feels he can trust. Hangeng is a sweet vampire, if they exist, and is willing to help Kyuhyun with any questions he has. But can the answers Hangeng provide really help Kyuhyun? Or just drag him further into an ancient feud that stretches well beyond the human world.

Foreword

I've been itching to write a supernatural story for a while but I haven't really had any ideas for plots....But now I do!! yay!

It may contain some M rated chapters for either or violence but I'll mark those with an M cause the whole story won't be like that

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kawiifan
#1
Chapter 6: i`m glad u update ^-^ where is Kyuhyun going and is hangeng going to catch
kyu before where he is going to? Plz update again soon
daseng
#2
It worked, yay!! ^^ (I'll actually read it now)
<3
kawiifan
#3
Chapter 5: omg PLZzzzz update i wanna know what happens next and if wookie
finds his half-sister he has never MET before and i think chul
has a soft side for kyu Plz update soon
daseng
#4
Chapter 5: WHEN DID YOU PLAN ON TELLING ME ABOUT THIS. OH, THE HYPOCRISY.

On another, less dramatic note, hi :3

I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. Because it explained a lot of the vampire-y stuff (you have really thought this out well, dear) and also because I like how all the character's...uhm...characters...are developing. Like, Kyuhyun is a vampire!! Yay! And Heechul, forever diverting the blame of events to someone else (cough cough Siwon cough) and Han Geng seems to really care a lot about Kyuhyun even though his humane instincts keep being mentioned so we can't be too sure if he likes Kyuhyun or is just protecting him.
Angry Zhou Mi. holy . And then Ryeowook feeling bad about it and wanting to make it up to him!! (even though his plan sounds ridiculously sinister, the principle of the thing is quite sweet) one question, when it's mentioned that Zhou Mi calls Ryeowook his treasure, do I rightly sense a bit of vampire love? It seems that way in Ryeowook's case, like he loves Zhou Mi. omg~~ ZhouWook is so lovely (and they're all eeeviiilll as well so it would be EVEN BETTER)

Okay, I'll stop ranting about ZhouWook now.
ONWARD (no this comment is not over yet you have to keep reading MWAHAAA...I am well aware of how little evil this action contains, shush~)

I would like to enquire where my Jongwoon is. But I suppose he was one if those ones you mentioned last chapter, how one died and one ran away? (I SWEAR TO CHRIST IF HE'S THE ONE THAT DIED)

I LIKE THIS EVEN MORE NOW.

OKAY

NOW I'M DONE. I HAVE NO MORE WORDS.

MY MIND IS BLANK.

ASIDE FROM ALL THESE WEIRDS I'M USING TO DESCRIBE HOW BLANK MY KIND IS THEY DON'T COUNT SSSHHHH IT WILL ALL BE OVER SOON

SOON

SOOOOOON


GOOD WORK. I LIKE IT. ^_^
daseng
#5
Chapter 4: Ooh me likey ;) so dramatic!! I love the detail there about Ryeowook being Kyuhyun's grandfather, I think that's a nice twist (a little creepy, yes, but still good!)
Zhou Mi is an evil lil oh mah gawd~ -fans self- that's really hot to be honest, like I can't handle this!
I know I was told most of these plot-bunnies before you wrote this anyway BUT the suspense was still there so well done there too <333
(Let's make the next one happen a little quicker though, yeah? If you need someone to pitch your ideas to again just call me ^^)
daseng
#6
Chapter 3: Thank you thank you thank you -jumps around like an idiot- THANK YOU LOVELY! (I apologise for my ertedness making you do this but in my defence you offered :3) That was a lot of blood though, like woah Kyuhyun y u no dead bro?! Then I remembered, Zhoumi would never let his lil pet die (I hope not anyway, since he's kinda necessary to Zhoumi's...life goals...mehehehe) ^^ AND WHAT WAS THAT ABOUT A GREAT GRANDSON?! YOU DID NOT TELL ME ABOUT THAT. OR AT LEAST I DON'T THINK YOU DID. Seriously though, WHAT?!

I liked this chapter, filthy leech indeed >:) mwahaha!
daseng
#7
Chapter 2: OOOH UPDATE!! Okay, even though I've said these supernatural things aren't my style (lol) I like this. But maybe I am biased because you are my waifu??
No no, it's probably because it's a cool storyline ^^
Ooh, Zhoumi's a naughty boy in this story, I have zero complaints there :P Now that I think about it, it was probably Zhoumi's attitude and the mention of some dramatic occurence with Ryeowook that's got me hooked on this now hahaha

Omg~~ >///< you're gorgeous-er (not a word)!!
My author notes are what's called "waffling on" my dear, I like yours :) Short sweet and get's to the point.
daseng
#8
Chapter 1: I've finally read it!! There! Good! Done!

It's pretty good, love :) Oh lord, I could see Siwon's outfit so clearly in my mind, what is wrong with me XD I don't usually read this supernatural stuff, but because it's your writing (and because it's kinda a requirement that I read your fics because you read mine and all that) I will get on board. That girl sounds like a cool kid, btw. Scarlett tho, what a name ^^
AwaGamer98
#9
This is nice~