A Place Called Home

Description

This story started as an entry for a contest way back when but it was never completed.  

After going through my old documents I decided to continue writing it and hope to complete it.

As sorrowful the poster and foreword may seem, this is a romantic comedy featuring Boa and Jaejoong.

Please show interest^^

Thanks for reading and supporting!

& Happy Valentine's Day ♡

© sweetsweets2 2014. All rights reserved. Distribution of any kind is prohibited without the written consent of sweetsweets2.

Foreword

FOREWORD

 

 

“Do you the bride, Boa Kwon,

take the groom, Yoochun Park,

to be your wedded husband,

to have and to hold,

for better or for worse,

for richer or for poorer,

to love and to cherish,

from this day forward,

for as long as you both shall live?”

 

 

 

Under that white lacy veil, crystalline tears stream down her fair, listless face and her body shakes in a quiet tremble she wishes she can stop, but she can’t.

 

Silence ensues the hall, and she knows that the whole world is waiting for her answer, the one and only answer of I do, and yet-

 

 

Yoochun squeezes her small, quivering hand and sends his wife-to-be a bright, encouraging smile, one that juxtaposes her hidden intentions.

 

“I…I…” she stutters and bites her lower lip. The groom’s face abruptly darkens upon hearing that weakness, that doubt, that insecurity in her tiny voice, a voice that shakes his heart in unimaginable ways.

 

Yoochun’s luminous eyes cloud over at the realization that-

 

“I can’t,” she weeps aloud and gives her lover an apologetic gaze through the lace, the last look in what she presumes to be for a very long time.

 

The entire hall seems to fall out of their seats, heads turning as the bride’s hand leaves the groom’s in apparent slow-motion.  She runs – and runs – and runs away from him, away from their future together.

 

Yoochun stares at his empty palm. Worst of all, he knew that there is nothing he can do about it.

 

 

Family members rise to their feet and a couple relatives even chase after the runaway bride.

 

“Boa! Boa Kwon! Where are you going?” the groom’s father yells, clutching his chest as if to prevent a heart attack.

 

But the small figure in the silky white dress is already making her way down the ever-tall staircase without regrets.

 

“Come back!” the mother shouts, but the beautiful crying girl in the translucent glass slippers doesn’t look back.

 

This time, she won’t look back.

 

 

Boa gasps at the end of the steps and backs away from a roaring midnight motorcycle that suddenly skidded to a halt and cut into her path. Her hands shield her pretty face and she retreats, only to be pulled back by the stranger’s strong, white leather-gloved grasp.

 

“Looks like you need some help escaping,” a melodious, playful voice flows out from behind a dull, golden helmet. Several deep white scratches appear along its right side, and a chunk of the shell is broken off the top left hemisphere - an appearance of risk and danger – and yet, Boa Kwon follows.

 

Without a word or even a sign of response, she quickly hops on the back of the hunk of metal, coiling short arms around the man’s slender waist, letting him take her away.

 

Though she has no idea who the mystery man is, nor where they will be going, as long as it isn’t here, Boa believes-

 

 

She believes that she will be happy.

 

 

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DearIC #1
Chapter 9: I finally got to read your last update~ BoA is such an amazing character being all clueless, while Jaejoong is turning crazy by himself haha...hope you get to continue writing this story~ :D
petalcake
#2
sweets! *add oil* i know you'll come back with a continuous good plot~ anticipating all the time. ^_- if this one doesnt work out. im sure u'll be back with another GREAT story!!! supporting you all the way, all the time. <3
sweetsweets2 #3
Sorry that the plot is slow and/or the chapters are too short TT
I will try my best to gear the storyline in a better direction.
Please look upon this story nicely, readers :3 Thank you for reading!
petalcake
#4
Chapter 9: hm, dont think i understand the point of each chapter anymore. the plot seems a bit undeveloped. boa appear out of nowhere and she staying at a stranger house. and having feelings for him after talking to his friend? i hope to see more action and fun as in PTKTMH. thanks for the update. hope to see more in the next chapter. thanks!
Darlovejae #5
Chapter 9: Why JAEJOONG is acting like that..?
petalcake
#6
it's been 2 weeks :( hopefully this week? *wink* ;)
sweetsweets2 #7
Hi all! Thanks for reading. I will hopefully be updating sometime next week^^
DearIC #8
Chapter 8: I was laughing during the entire chapter~ BoA is so clueless and Heechul just want to gossip~....hahaha....it was so funny to read about the frustrated Heechul don't understanding the point of the conversation haha..
skkyyul #9
Chapter 8: omg omg uri heechul aaaahhhh please update soon
skkyyul #10
Chapter 2: nice story author><