Chapter 1: oh goodness :) that's deep
while i read this, the only thought crossed my mind was how creepy it would be if the boy was pale and not healthy looking like jin lol

Chapter 1: It is like a ditty.
What can I do to get a boy in my locker ??

This was very interesting and refreshing. It read more like a poem rather than a story and I really like that :)

Chapter 1: I clicked on the link thinking I'd be in for some serious fluff but I got this instead.

I now want a boy in my locker.

Chapter 1: This really was kinda sweet. The meaning behind this is sorta sad, but it's touching too . Surprised I never commented on this, I remember seeing it before. I haven't seen you do this sort of metaphor and poetry much before or since this, I don't think. But hey, it's nice as its own little thing. :)

Chapter 1: This was really something unique, and I truly enjoyed reading it. The style is so different from what people usually read; it was refreshing to see this creativity. The way you wrote it doesn't include many words or descriptions, but yet it does. The subtlety of the meaning behind what you've written is quite powerful and emotional. An amazing piece of writing. :D

Chapter 1: This touched me...I saw you had put this up long ago and I read it on my birthday for 2014 the Feburary 24 of 2014. It was so beautiful.

Chapter 1: :) I raided your stories this evening..to most of them I didn't gave a chance and now I regret it:(
Your writing style really impressed me when I started reading Springfield and Illusory :D
You write so beautifully and full of essence ( sorry,I'm not so good with words ) .
This short story about Jin , I wish I had read it on Valentine's day,I was really depressed at that time :))
It is really meaningful,how you shouldn't waste an opportunity :)
Thank you for sharing and for writing this story!
I wish this would have a sequel though,like a second chance..:)

this is beautiful...touching and inspiring... thank you for writing this.