Heavy Touches

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Description

Donghae is mute.  Hyukjae is blind.  But that’s ok.

Foreword

 

Heavy Touches [ revised ]
prompt:  disability.
genre:  romance, romantic fluff, bits of humor sprinkled in.
a/n:  once again, i went through a painstaking amount of trouble to preserve the original dialogue/scenes because i’m nostalgic like that.
note:  check out my fic list to see which of my stories will return.

 

SCENE PREVIEW:

“If you have s and I end up grabbing them, I sincerely apologize.”  A derisive snort bobbed the knob of his throat as he swiveled left and d more empty space.  “But keep in mind you’re the one who won’t say anything.  I don’t know why, but you’re still here.  I know you are.  I can hear you.”

 

hyukko
if i wrote a sequel, does anyone care if it's written in first or third person? what do you prefer? 🤔

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yanHae15
142 streak #1
Chapter 1: Please write the sequel. 🥹 Maybe 3rd person is fine. Because I would want both povs if you write in 1st person 😅
the_fictitious
#2
This is very cute!
byeolnim_
#3
Chapter 1: thank you for the story authornim, this is so cute!
SingMelodyyy
#4
Chapter 1: This is such a cute and heartwarming story!! Donghae trying to make all those sounds for Hyuk to understand him is purely adorable!! 😍
nanopicofish
#5
Chapter 1: THE CHRIPING AUTHORNIM I THOUGHT OF U
https://twitter.com/SpaceCatPics/status/1316604251074895872?s=19
nanopicofish
#6
Chapter 1: I'M HERE ON A RECOMMENDATION WINKW INKWINKWINK
I said in my previous comment that I hoped donghae would cry pretty anime tears, I came here and now I'M the one crying pretty anime tears wtaf this was so cute I can just imagine the chirps and cute awkward squaks
This is such a cute dynamic though, i honestly didn't expect donghae to let hyukjae know he was mute by bringing his hand to his throat, so I was kinda floored by how cute and poignant you managed to write it in that way.

If you DO write a sequel for this hehheh I'm sure we'll love whichever, first or third person perspective, you throw at us, though,,, I bet it'll be hella hilarious to read hyukjae's witty inner thoughts, but also I imagine an outspoken character like him would have just as much vulnerable thoughts shielded behind his wit and cheerful personality.
CrazySuJuNoona
#7
Chapter 1: I love this, like I love ALL of your fics ;-; its So sweet i might die. As for the writing style,first is generally more personable. Not that either is bad!
sujudeux
#8
Chapter 1: this is so adorable and cute authornim~ i'm looking forward for the sequel of this!!!!
PenguinLOvers772
#9
Chapter 1: Yes please make a sequel. I willing definitely read it ^^
yanHae15
142 streak #10
Chapter 1: This is great. I hope there's more