it's not like you,,,maybe we gonna make some stories contrast with our personality???<br />
but it is very nice and sweet story,,better if continue it..make the sequel,,,,,

I will make the sequel

Thanks for all your suggestion. I will work hard. Actually it's not comedy. It's my personal experience.

prend...<br />
i still feel so ordinary...<br />
the content has comedy genre right??<br />
could u give more humour or some funny act in every chapter??<br />
even though, i'd like to read the next chapter...<br />
hehehe....

yes, i ask for the sequel. hehee..<br />
nice story..