Chapter 1: just like the first commenter, im a little confused, but i think i understand bits of it. i shall read it again and again. but this is good. it leaves a mystery. i like stories like this, because they make me think and really really think about things more than theyre written out for me to read. i sound a little vague, but yea :))))

Chapter 1: i'm really confused about what the story was supposed to be about
but i think i liked it