Chapter 1: So sweet
sequel,perhaps? Maybe something goes wrong (like one of them moves, injured and loses there memory etc.) or after marriage?
:)

kyaaaaaa... i love this!! this is so sweet...but yea, i wish its longer...hehehe...sequel? ^^

Seungho!!!<br />
And Rain's cool with the whole thing. XD<br />
I never thought about Seungho composing a song for me. <br />
Well, not exactly me, but.. =_="<br />
I'm really glad you mentioned that. XD<br />
I just hope that you'll make it longer?<br />
Or, make them in proper paragraph (?)<br />
It's just a friendly suggestion for your other stories. ^^

It was very cute! I enjoyed it!