this is just shameless advertising >///< but i'd be really grateful if you guys could check out my other stories too, maybe give feedback? I promise you, I put the same effort into them as I did this fic.
Wow wtf is this even this is such an amazing debut ficlet! I love it wahhh so good and fluffy but is that it? No more? SEQUEL PLS MAYBE EVEN IN MYUNGIE'S SISTER'S POV
Chapter 1: Omo, I loved this! It was a beautiful little bit of blank verse, almost, invoking lots of of things - Shut Up! Flower Boy Band, Sugngyu's 60 Seconds MV, How I Met Your Mother. :D I like that there seemed to be a whole, fleshed-out world beyond them, but it was just on the fringes and unnecessary to the story as a whole, which happened...almost like a diorama, or something in a sweet little bubble. Which is love, isn't it? hahaha. And of course, the countdown to love, a very effective device. :D
This was a really sweet fic, and thank you so much for submitting it! I loved looking through Myungsoo's eyes as he slowly fell for the girl. Keep it up!
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