Ward C

Description

No one is entirely safe in their mind.

Foreword

For Shiny_A_plus' contest, Writing Down the Bones. I really hope I didn't screw the whole story up and waste her time because she's really an awesome author. I love her stories to bits and so needless to say, it's really nerve-racking for me to enter this contest. It makes my writing seem very small in comparison to hers but either way I'm praying that it'll be enough to impress her. 

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DragonKookie #1
Chapter 4: I liked the idea of this story a lot, and your writing is very good!! However your writing style took me a little to get used to, transitioning wise. Also I felt like some things didn't add up when I was reading. I was confused on whether Taeyon was there for a long time or if she showed up and that's when things started progressing fastly.. Idk lol but I enjoyed it. Horror is very hard to write
shiiramonika #2
Chapter 4: Reminds me of the movie The Ward
Shiny_A_plus #3
Chapter 4: Wow! Lots of twists and turns and surprises with this one. I'm really glad you did a horror story; that's a very hard genre to attempt, so kudos to you! Thank you for writing this! I've been writing down notes for editorial purposes and will be in touch. :)
Shawol360 #4
Chapter 4: I'm no good with Horror stories but I thought this was written really well. And I literally was kept guessing the entire time. Good job .
kriskwf81 #5
naisu desu neh~
blingdinobling #6
I like this idea, update soon, neh? ^^
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