New Love (a Kang JiYoung & Lee KiKwang one-shot)

Description

this is my first time writing a kpop story so sorry if it . Apple this is for you hope you like it.

Foreword

I meet him last year and it was love at first sight for both of us. That day we exchanged numbers and from there we started our relationship. No one knows about us. We have been going strong for a year now without anyone finding out about us. And today is our one year anniversary. Oh, you wanna know who i am? I am Kang  JiYoung the Maknae of the popular girl group Kara. Oh you wanna know who it is that I'm dating? He is none other then Lee KiKwang lead dancer and singer of the popular boy group BEAST/B2ST. Well thats my introduction I have to go finish getting ready for my date with KiKI now.

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Mlou13 #1
Chapter 5: this story was so cute and it reminds me of a drams kikwang was in and its almost the same as this but they didn't have a baby at the end but it was the same amount if not a lil bit more kawaiiness
Kokopoof #2
THis is SO cute! That adorable monster! lol
Ajtothehustler #3
it was great
saranghaejunsu #4
SHE HAD A KID. LOL, I wouldn't have expected this. x)
nomadictrail #5
hmmmm. ok. i shall be critical because i want to help ok? i'm sorry if i come off rude or anything like that. i'm not being rude, i just want to help. >.<<br />
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first. it felt like reading a summary. eeeeep. x_x i'm sorry! but that's the truth. maybe next time you can delve into more details. uhmmm... and more paragraphs. like describe they're settings a bit or they're actions and reactions. you know that phrase/sentence 'don't think, just barrel on' it's like that. not the thinking part, but the barreling on part. >.><br />
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second. hmmm... i like my dialogues in separate paragraphs. or at least a character's line in it's own paragraph and not everything and everyone in a single blob or block. it's easier to read. ^_^<br />
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third. ok. i guess i'm just too idealistic, but jiyoung's hella young for a baby. T_T i mean, i'd kill junsu if he impregnates liyin right now and she's 22. lmfao.<br />
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lil monster's pic on the poster is a plus, though. lmfao!!!
mtrueninja #6
wow! nice!! I like it.. :))<br />
kikwang<33 :)
kiss_xander23 #7
Apple its over now im so sad :( but im going to work on the sequel and im going to try to write another story maybe on kyuhyun heechul or onew im not sure yet
AppleJaJing #8
I Loved it!!!
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