Chapter 1: Oh my god. I cried so much, especially when Sehun came. This is truly beautiful author-nim! I wished this could've been longer!! Maybe you can make it into a longer fic by doing one month per chapter and using more detail. Maybe you can put it into Jongins pov or keep it 3rd person, it's up to you but I really hope you make it!!! ^^
Chapter 1: nope
not fricking okay
this is so vaguely written yet so detailed
stringing nice words together to make painful sentences
heart wrenching fic and ugh i'm going to cry brb
Chapter 1: cries ing loudly, what have i ever done to have my heart ripped up and stomped on
tears would stream down my cheeks if i didn't have all this stupid pride omfg
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