First Love

Description

I got a light to write this down after I read a beautiful story presented by Jindeul-sama entitled Baby's Breath. Gee, how I envy you, Jindeul-Sama! Hereby, I would also love to credit him (or her?) as a main inspirator for me (is that even a word? lol).

 

Basically, this is a spin off of Baby's Breath albeit I deviate some of the elements in the story. This story is inspired by a very beautiful song sung by a very beautiful singer, Cinta Pertama, which means 'First Love' in Bahasa Indonesia, sung by Bunga Citra Lestari which happens to act in a film whose title is similar to the song. True, I also borrow the plot, I am such a huge borrower! However, I can't avoid relating these two things together and I am sorry for being really not original. I happen to try writing a story touching enough to make the readers cry. That's my ultimate and a lifelong goal. Muahahahahahahaha!

 

In the end, all credits go to the beautiful, beautiful Bunga Citra Lestari for serving as muse to me; God Lord who created the human being that I use to act in my story; and to everyone who is charmed by the beauty of first love, wherever their first love is now.

 

It is purely fictional anyway. ;)

 

Foreword

Tiap kali aku berlutut, aku berdoa

Suatu saat kau bisa cinta padaku

Tiap kali aku memanggil di dalam hati

Mana cinta, mana cintaku?

Mana cintaku ...?

 

And everytime I am kneeling down, I am praying upon

So that one day, you could in the end fall for me

And everytime I am calling you deep inside my heart

Where is my love, where are you my love?

Where are you my love ...?

 

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ephemeral24
2412 streak #1
Chapter 3: awww... how i wish this was continued! would've loved to know what happened to them... did Kris die or did he take off some time ago? why does Jun love him so much still? ughhhh, we'll never know
lunaluna #2
Chapter 3: omg i love love this story but don't tell me its gonna be a sad ending. waaaaa i want suho to end up with kris