Chapter 1: This is tragic, and hits you in the feels. But I think the theme running through it so consistently, from the very first paragraph, is the age difference. And you've done that really well - I feel like most Ontae fics are focused on how the age difference is perceived by others, or how they get hung up on the age difference themselves and whether it is appropriate, etc. But here, you show the difference in maturity levels, and how that gap of years cause the strain as Jinki's fears from the start of a fickle love come to fruition. It may not seem important, but years do make a difference and separate them in their stages in life. So sad, but so real.

Chapter 1: Soooo good

/crais so hard

Chapter 1: My heeeeeeartttt omg what have you done to meeeee ; A;