Train Ride

Description

Amber's been stuck at her dead end office job for almost six years, continuously putting her music composition dream on pause. She dreads almost every moment of her work day, besides the train there and back. Why? Besides the passing scenery, that was definitely not the only thing Amber enjoyed looking at.

Foreword

Who exactly is she?

We both ride the same train, at the exact same time in the exact same car.

She's definitely hard to miss, or even pry your eyes from her. A real beauty.

She's never noticed me. Never noticed my presence. Never noticed my stares. Never noticed the coincidental timing we both have.

I want to know her.

I want to know the girl who's been driving me crazy for the past three months.

So, tell me.

Who exactly is she?


Oi! It is I, Sora! I've decided to try out a one-shot story and hopefully win your hearts over with it. Now I've decided to continue on with this story a bit as a short story. Heh. Heh. Keke.

Don't worry, I haven't put my other story on hold. I'm actually writing it at the same time as this one. I'M MULTI TASKING. MUHAHAHA.

Be sure to leave you comments on how you feel about this story after you've read it and took time to process it. I'd be really helpful to me to try and improve my writing skills a bit on here. Sometimes I feel as if I'm half assing the plot and the way I write it. Thanks!

Sora.

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Hyphen-bae
#1
Chapter 3: What a cliffhanger!
D_Moon_212
#2
Chapter 3: Oh my ghad that's totally a cliffhangerrrrrrr~~~
Countingme #3
Chapter 3: great story. ^____^
jzlee_91
#4
Chapter 3: omo omo omo omo omo!!!!! pls do continue this pls pls pls pls pls!!!!
XDRAGGZ #5
Chapter 3: ;) really good story .
IryssJ
#6
Chapter 3: Oh my gosh..! This is amazing, we need part 2, please...!
cooljags #7
Chapter 3: Waow loved it
denisha #8
Chapter 3: authoor pleaase. .needs sequel. plis, plis,plis.. it's awesome. woaah, love it.
jpigtom #9
Chapter 3: Thank yo author for making another story of kryber eventhough kryber now is never show up.please continue ur hardwork and never give up on kryber!!thank you!
Jheszie #10
Chapter 3: Yeah Author be nice to your readers and make us the Happiest Readers in the World whahahaha please!!!
Epilogue part 2 are needed hahahaha ^___^
Thank you Author you know we love you and ofcourse your Story!!! We'll be waiting for your epilogue part 2 ;)))))