Permanent Scars

Description

Kyungsoo lets the ugly names stick to him like glue, and he doesn't dare move when he feels a fist connect with his face. He tells himself that he's not the only one victimized, but the thought disappears as soon as it is created because it provides little comfort when Jongin, kind and compassionate Jongin, is the one doing the hurting.

Foreword

I am a huge Kaisoo shipper, but I always seem to have trouble writing Kaisoo fanfics? I suppose its because I am juggling school as well, but I love Kaisoo too much not to try. ^o^ I'm sorry for my mediocre writing, I was really just envisioning the plot when I came up with the fanfic. :D

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Bigaaples #1
Chapter 1: bruhh nice story but i didnt really like the ending tho. wished it was more of an open ending. i felt like the only reasong jongin wanted to stop kyungsoo was because he felt pity. pity and not guilt. that hurts tho. i skiped a few lines after the 'bridge' part coz i want the ending to be more opened and acceptable imo
blueskysoo
#2
Chapter 1: this is really heartbreaking ㅠㅠ
Petachi
#3
Chapter 1: Ok so in my mind, Jongin jumps into the water and saves Kyungsoo and then Kyungsoo leaves that school and starts his life over
And then eventually he rises up in life. And at some point Jongin becomes a worker under him

Ok this is me trynna hide my pain T^T
It was beautiful you know T___T
popstarjewel13 #4
Chapter 1: I keep revisiting this story as it's so good though it always makes me cry at the end <3
kyungsquishysoo #5
Chapter 1: I love this, and idk if its the period hormones or what but I definitely teared up. I would love to see some kind of spin off of this, like maybe describing the after math but from jongins POV.
exodyoxoxo #6
Chapter 1: I read this so many times and it still hurts till now.. imo at the end Jongin wasnt sincerely liking ksoo to me bcs "...I'll still be here 'if you want me'." Well maybe he likes ksoo (in confusion..idk), but I'm not surprised if he will hurt ksoo in future. Then, he feels something's wrong (as he has seen ksoo in school but not coming to their class)..Also Jongin just wants to save ksoo just because he's afraid that he will be the suspect who's causing the death hmm.. -sorry for my bad eng
Great story authornim! I love ur other story too T_T <3
Kaisoorom #7
Chapter 1: Im reading this for the 100th time and im crying all over again and i dont mind saying that jongin is the biggest jerk here again uuh
Xyakori
#8
Chapter 1: OH MY GOD. But really Kyungsoo was too hurt. He just broke.
RedLuck
#9
Chapter 1: I don't know what's more terrific—the last sentence of the story or the fact that there is no "next" button below it.