` ☆┊application ; trainees。

★ ┊ whiplash // new co-ed group ; information page.
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#chosen - you're in the group o/
#accepted - your application has pretty much no mistakes so you're accepted o/
#reviewing - we're working on reviewing your app otl
#pending - we haven't got to your app yet orz
#declined - your app has three or more mistakes go fix them before the deadline!
#rejected - you've had three chances to fix your mistakes, and now you can't apply anymore. sorry.
 
 
 
 
 
 
deerthehun — jeon jungah ) #chosen
  
park sung sin - member whiplash - bambi - main vocalist, lead dancer - neons
deerthehun — she's my character ♡ yes, her stage name is bambi, you jealous? i know you are. be sure to be creative with your stage names if you're making up one! you don't know how many times i've seen someone's stage name be the first or last syllable of their name. okay. so apply soon, guise! i'm hoping to find my last co-author soon!
 
--dead — booooo. your character z. //bricked. i am so not jealous of her stagename. >N>. thatwhatisaid. i won't be creative, cuz, i wont //bricked again. my character will smash you into pieces if you touch her. //bricked again. don't get near her. //whispers. anyway, your character is cool and bambi-ish, and i hope she won't bother my character. eue.
 
 
 
--dead — baek hyojin ) #chosen
  
sin bi - member of whiplash - rose - lead rapper, main vocalist - thorns
deerthehun — bahahahhh i ain't jelly. BI you be very creative deer. /slapped. she looks cold bc she doesn't smile. hey i was considering using her as a face claim loool. but then i found someone better /bricked. anyway. your character looks like a kewl one. but mine's way cooler bahahah /shot. but srsly nice character gurl.
 
--dead — yeah, it's my character. be jealous of the stagename, bish. e u e. i really don't have much to say about her, except the part is that she doesn't smile in any of the photoshoots they have. seriously, it's obvious. YA WHY SO SERIOUSSSS.~
 
 
 
lostinlove — choi dongwook ) #accepted
  
jang hyun jae - member of whiplash - micheal - triple threat - wookies
deerthehun — hey o/ congrats on being the first applicant! /throws glitter and cupcakes. ehem. so. i enjoyed your application a lot, but you forgot to title it correctly, delete some authors notes and write a description in the style section orz. i won't dock you for the a/ns and the title, so you're accepted. but homfg bby you guise are all making me want to have a member of the group as a love interest. so I made a member of the group my back-up /cough asifminhyunwillbechosenbyanyoneelse. /clears throat. so, congrats! /loving yo application ♡♡♡
 
​--dead — omfg, a guy applicant. ;7; hyoyoung won't like him if he was chosen. you know how hyoyoung is, she's a bish. ;u; nobody is going to like her. where was I, o right. omfg, everything is so lovely and solid, like seriously. omfg, it's sohee bby. ;A; finally, she gets love //bricked. a man who loves skinship >N> hyoyoung: /slowly walks away. cough. I freakin love everything here. like seriously. we need some glitter and cupcakes, o author is already handling that, okay, nvm. omfg, YUUUSSS his love interest is a member of whiplash. yaaaay, im not alone ;A; //bricked again. ♡♡♡♡
 
 
 
shabang — hwang jinyi ) #accepted
  
angelababy - tao - genie - main vocalist, main dancer - wishes
deerthehun — okaaaay. I'm awake and happy, so lesh get this party started BI. nothing seems to be missing, which is good <3 homfq after reading your background, I almost cried. maybe it's because... hormones. /clears throat. anyway. all of this, actually, is beautiful, mayng. I love your writing bc perfect and I can understand like everything you say. it's kinda hard to believe english isn't your first language. mmkay. I'm done. you're accepted. c:
 
--dead — omfg, i feel like crying. the background is so freakin' beautiful ;AAA; i'm so sorry for this epic late review, anyway. i freakin' love that your character is chinese, isn't that great?! a member who isn't just korean or half-american, lol. lol. lol. i love your ulzzang(net idol), she's pretty, but some of her sel-cas are't really..HD. o well, anyway, are you sure english isn't your first language???????? ;p;
 
 
 
eunmi_stitch — seol eunjoo ) #accepted
  
kim seuk hye - tao - joo - lead vocalist, dancer - joowel
deerthehun — hai-yeom! c: lol. I really like your character so far. her personality is really something. she does seem like an extrovert. her background is really well-written like her personality, it was very clear and descriptive. just one thing you don't have to add, but were her parents supportive of her going and becoming a trainee? just wondering lol. anyway. the trivia & fame section are good-- whoa another Tao love interest ohohooo this romantic panda seems to be good with the ladies-- /slapped hard. jk. everything else is great, so you're accepted! go throw a party or something o/
 
--dead — hello there! um, your character is quite interesting. u v u, having different personality traits mi-ght be difficult to write about, but it's still fine. i really love how you are very descriptive on the personality and background part. you explai-ned very well and never really missed anything. hhaahah-- she likes red bull. i have plans /slapped. anyway, i enjoyed your application alot, thank you for applying. <3 thank you, lovely.
 
 
 
chunsaangel21 — cruz leon dustin ) #accepted
  
lee chi hoon - iu - leon - main vocalist, lead dancer - fierce
deerthehun — hai, chunsa! so I finally stopped being lazy and procrastinating and finally got to your application <3 so, I like how your character was portrayed and the background was nice, but his personality is a little all over the place, like how the sentences don't flow right into each other. I won't reject you for that, though. I noticed that sehun's personality doesn't really suit his actual personality, he's actually pretty shy and just looks like a little who ruined my bias list-- /cough. sorry. anyway, I'll accept you because your character is really well-portrayed. you're cutting really close though, because one more screw-up and you would have been rejected o n o. just fix the ones I listed above, including sehun's personality, and you'll be better.
 
--dead — hello there, again! anyway, for your galleries part, google doesn't really give you good pictures, { more like crappy and non-quality pictures /cOUGH }. but i ain't going to be strict because of that. going to your personality, it seems like you kind of copy it off from somewhere? the font is a little mess up and also the sente-nces in the personality area doesn't fit with each other. um, yeah, lemme get positive here. i like the fact that he is over-protective when it comes to his sister! that's cute and wonderful at the same time. <3. anyway, since you are already accepted, i'm not going to say anything farther than this. thank you for applying though ; v ;.
 
 
 
chunsaangel21 — cruz hanna valerie ) #accepted
  
do hwe ji - park sanghyun - chunsa - lead vocalist, dancer - angels
deerthehun — so hey again. so, I read through this one and the background and personality are great, clear and descriptive. I like this one a lot, she's cute and sarcastic like me /cough cough. wow, I'm like sick or something. all this coughing. lol. anyway, short review on this one because I feel like I covered everything on Dustin's app... hm. anyway, you're accepted so go celebrate because your characters passed inspection! yay ♡
 
--dead — hello there! again! again with the google stuff, not worrying about it. it's nice that you gave us ALOT of suggestions, ahahahha. no thinking for me. /sLAPPED. anyway, i like how you are clear in your personality area thing, but still, the sentences aren't really--. /cOUGH. you got me sick too, idiotic author. anyway, i like how your character is tomboyish yet still innocent and gullible, kind of like a 3d personality, that'sjustme. anyway, thank you for applying <3.
 
 
 
shabang — kim hwi ) #chosen
     
kim do hoon - member of whiplash - theo - sub-rapper, main dancer - t-adore
deerthehun — annyeong again! so I love theo as much as I loved jinyi because they were so well written like omfg ; u ; and I love his background and personality, those were my second favorite parts, next to the trivia lol. bc beautiful and volume up are my favorite cube ent. songs. um yeah I sort my favorite songs by company, what's wrong with that? BI anyway, your character is like so good like I can't even breathe mayng your character so so good. /s0bs. and the fan name suggestions are like so good because I thought of wh14 too like omf (´▽`)ノ anyway you're accepted again /fangirling like rly hard
 
--dead — coming soon ♡
 
 
 
hongbinpls — jung mirae ) #accepted
  
yura - member of whiplash - vanessa - rapper, main dancer - lollipop
deerthehun — hey hey hey < 3 so sorry for the late review, I get like really lazy all the time otl. ok to your character o/ tbh when I was reading your application, I couldn't stop bc it was so god-like srsly c': it was so pretty and well-described, I luf it asdfghjkl so you're accepted because I love your characters personality and background and the trivia is perf too ok so yay go celebrate < 3333 
 
--dead — coming soon ♡
 
 
 
yeolsock — shin leehoon ) #chosen
  
jo geun hyeong - member of whiplash - ocean - main vocalist, lead dancer - wave
deerthehun — hei there. /waves awkwardly. /slapped. just saying I loved the application to death, I'm serious. I know what your thinking. "She says that about everyone--" but no. this time I mean it. leehoon reminds me of an umma bc he's so caring omfg-- he's like a erted umma xD do those even exist? his background is kinda sad-ish but I like it too because it's interesting o u o. his style & family/friends are good, I don't exactly pay attention to that tbh-- /burned. those are like important pats too what. the whole trivia section is the best I'm sobbing tears if joy rn this whole thing is perf ok. I like the fame part, there's not much to be seen there though bc the section doesn't involve much writing-- /looks at love interest section. e u e this is so sweet. I bet --dead will have fun reviewing this application ohohooo so I'm pretty sure I can't find anything bad to say about this application, so you're accepted ; u ; /huggles 5ever
 
--dead — coming soon ♡
 
 
 
gongjyuu — jayden boo ) #accepted
  
lee sunho - whiplash member - j-den - lead rapper & vocalist - unbooreakable
deerthehun — hai there ouo to the review o/ so first off, I have to say your writing skills are gorgeous QUQ why don't you just write the story for us- ehem. I love how he's half-british be aude that's cool and unique-ish. eue. his personality & background are cute, the sensitive songwriter... and the tall and handsome asian guy but that's in the past. /coughs. his style is pretty alright too, I like how he dresses simply. nothing too over-the-top or crazy lol. and plainly said, the trivia is wonderful and charming. all I can say. anyway. the love interest section is so sweet i am cry. I literally can't find anything bad about this, so I will go sit in a corner. you're accepted, btw.
 
--dead — coming soon ♡
 
 
lillyanna — jung miyung ) #declined {x} { } { }
  
kim shin yeong - kim myungsoo - miyung - main dancer, main vocalist - dyas
deerthehun — hai lyne o/ I shall get to reviewing now bc I have nothing else to do. ._. anyway, first point: your ulzzang. I wouldn't exactly support shin yeong as a face claim for the story because she might be a little too cute for the group. I recommend you change your ulzzang, unless you can find some photos of her that suit the image of the group. second, her personality is a bit all over the place. explain why she's a bit dumb about people's feelings, explain her personality traits, write a little bit more. elaborate on her background & style as well. for the love interest section, it seems a bit unrealistic for myungsoo to be there and not have people fangirling over him or have him not be a little weirded out by a stranger looking on his laptop... please fix these mistakes and well accept you. /bows
 
--dead — coming soon ♡
 
 
gongjyuu — yoo sunji ) #accepted
  
lee ho sin - yook sungjae - yooji - triple threat - suns
deerthehun — hai again. huehue. reviewing, right-- your background and personality are beautiful, as always /cough cough. her story is wonderful, it's cute how you added her ex in there for a little bit but he still played an important role in the deciding of her going to cube and stuff ouo. i can tell she's really passionate about dancing, omg it's amazing. the trivia was interesting, sleeping and drinking habits huehue. on ething I noticed was rhat the grammar was a little off omg. but that's pretty much the only bad thing. the whole entire love interest thing was amazingly adorable with the awkwardness. you're accepted ok. ♥
 
--dead — coming soon ♡
 
 
 
soupbunny — moon anela ) #accepted
  
byun jieun - jongin - anela - main vocalist, main dancer - vanela
deerthehun — hei there. /waves. once I read anela's personality, I thought she would be like the crack member of the group xD but then again, there can only be one. unless there's a derp squad of some sort than that would be acceptable ohohohoho anyway. back to reviewing huehue. her style is very simplistic and nothing too loud and nothing too complicated, I like it cx /ignores family bc laziness... the trivia was cute heheheh beer & puppies good combination lol. /ignore fame too bc there's not much writing to do there anyway... ohohooo, I like the love interest section, it's adorable. i'm not even that into noona-dongsaeng relationships but this one is just like a romcom < 4 and for the last question, the dorm is a little co-ed, if you count just one room that's co-ed and the others being same gender, then yes. your application was good, so you're accepted cx
 
​--dead — coming soon ♡
 
 
 
wheeeee — jung chanshik ) #accepted
  
lee seungho - amber liu - kevin - triple threat - ace
deerthehun — so hai /waves awkwardly ovo. /coughs. ok to the review o/ the first thing I wanna say is that I noticed the love interest & final words section is really far off from the left oAo is that normal for all the apps or is it just like that orz anyway for the character, he's great omg the writing sections were short and sweet, just enough information I needed lol. and over to the trivia... he's afraid of fish omg cx that's adorable ok. /coughs. I don't know why but I alway skip over the fame  section for some reason hm. anyway, to the love interest section o/ that's sweet, I never see amber getting any love because shes a tomboy < 3 anyway, your application was good, so you're accepted o/
 
--dead — coming soon ♡
 
 
 
_shelly — kim victoria ) #chosen
  
an su kyung - whiplash member - tori - main dancer, vocalist - victori
deerthehun — omg omg omg hai. i love your character seriously ok as much as I lufed leehoon's. su kyung is one of my favorite ulzzangs so you picked the right girl huehue- victoria's personality is adorable and erted lol. she's so random I can't even this is amazing. I can already tell she and jungah would be great friends xD her background was sad-ish, poor girl lost her father ;; anyway, onto the trivia, she hates pink cx 'too girly' is right! we need that kind of stuff in the group- and the clinging the is cute omg love interest section time! his personality seems like juliet as a guy xD I'm dying of laughter rn-- /cough cough cough ok I'm back don't worry. how they met was funny too, bloody hell- interactions are sweet awh q v q ok. you're accepted. no worries, go celebrate, dear <3 oh I have to review your other application lol. I shall do that soon o/
 
​--dead — coming soon ♡
 
 
 
_shelly — yong daejin ) #reviewing
  
won jong jin - whiplash member - jack - sub-vocalist, main dancer - silent devils
deerthehun — updating later orz
 
--dead —coming soon ♡
 
 
 
providential — lee jeonghyun ) #pending
  
park jae hyun - whiplash member - alex - main vocalist, lead dancer - hyunions
deerthehun — updating later orz
 
--dead —coming soon ♡
 
 
 
kyledude788 — marcus dela cruz choi ) #pending
  
daniel padilla - kaeun - mars - triple threat - none yet
deerthehun — coming soon ♡
 
--dead — coming soon ♡
 
 
 
500sunny500 — park changhyun ) #pending
  
dae hwan - namjoo - changhyun - lead vocalist, dancer - chanhugz
deerthehun — updating later orz
 
--dead — coming soon ♡
 
 
 
laybintao — choi hanbyul ) #pending
  
hong yoon jae - seohyun - hanbyul - lead vocalist, dancer - meteorite
deerthehun — updating later orz
 
--dead — coming soon ♡
 
 
 
lovely0paradise — jung haram ) #pending
  
janghyun - whiplash member - moon - main dancer, main vocalist - stars 
deerthehun — coming soon ♡
 
​--dead — coming soon ♡
 
 
 
shortcake — kim minjun ) #pending
  
park kiho - whiplash member - miso - lead rapper, vocalist - miso soup
deerthehun — will update later orz
 
--dead — coming soon ♡
 
 
 
azure-chan — seo arai ) #chosen
  
mint - nichkhun - arah - triple threat - ara-uroras
deerthehun — will update later orz
 
--dead — coming soon ♡
 
 
 
blazing — ma yeol ) #pending
  
bae sanggon - whiplash member - ten - lead vocalist, dancer - raters
deerthehun — will update later orz
 
--dead — coming soon ♡
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kittyeri
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Chapter 14: sighs
too lazy to fix the layout