He felt himself blush in embarassment over such a large reaction to the picture of him and Sunghoon. Not to mention some of the things they were saying about him. Things that made his heart sink.
Chapter 1: This was good written, really :) You used the right amount of everything ^^ Dramatic, emotion, no emotions, regret, some kind of hope, hate, love... And it's amazing how this one sentence "You're going to be a great dad some day" changed everything, making it more intense and more hopeless I guess.
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