Parts of a Whole

Description

In which Kyuhyun believes in soulmates and Yesung is a greedy bastard that never shares the chips!




 

Foreword

#..........why do I never remember this? ...probably 64 or 65.

This is Continuum I suppose, but it was written for the Kyusungfest on LJ and I decided to cross post it here. I figure it's been a while since I posted anything. Though I should change that soon...can't let my OTP suffer.

Written for AllSpecialSmile ^^

Prompt:  #190- Soulmates

Title: Parts of a Whole

Pairing(s): Kyusung

Summary: Kyuhyun believes in soulmates.

Rating:PG

Pairing (s): Kyusung

Word Count : 2.4K

Warnings: None





 






 

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359359
#1
Chapter 1: This was wonderful and so true. Kyu probably did want some beautiful girl with lady parts but ended up with some weird raven head. But I don't think he'd have it any other way <3, this was really beautiful.
JayJayELF
#2
Chapter 1: Daebak!!! that is legit all i can say.
akirachan
#3
Chapter 1: I was smiling all through out. hahaha! this is so daebak. :D
AllSpecialSmile
#4
Chapter 1: That was wonderful Naz !! You know I'm really happy you chose this prompt, and the way you wrote it was really interesting. I just love when there's evolution in the relationship, like at first Kyuhyun doesn't think much of Yesung (he doesn't even remember noticing him the first time they met...) and then he slowly falls in love with him.
I really liked that part "Kyuhyun didn't get up one morning, walk across the hallway and into the kitchen and stare at Jongwoon worshiping his coffee and decide he was in love with the weirdo." I don't know why, it sums up everything. It wasn't sudden and I just loved that aspect.
Oh and the part "instead he got a sometimes pinked haired man that spoke to turtles and thought it was alright to molest other people's philtrum" was funny XD that's so Yesung haha

Thank you for this little story, it's just what I love to read ! Especially if it's about soulmates (because Kyuhyun and his beliefs always make a good fanfiction). Good job Naz !
honeyssa
#5
Chapter 1: I left comment for you naz :^)
you know i always love your fic. and always read. Always. eventhough I like being silent reader.
and this one, is lovely (also cheesy but well, you know i love cheesy kyusung and the way you tell kyuhyun's inner thoughts was interesting)
keep writing for your fan like me \(≧∇≦)/
ILiveForJongwoon
#6
Chapter 1: At first I thought,the way Kyuhyun imagined his soulmate to be was cliche-classic kind of way.
The way you put it with Yesung, I got reminded of his quirky traits and little things that make me love him.
I gushed at the Yesung and Kyuhyun movie <3
Loved this, it was kinda of something that went back into reality.
One of the best authors of there for sure~
thursday #7
still lovely.
LazyLlama199
#8
Chapter 1: It's not the same cuteness with a mix of angst as usual, but I find it very interesting to read Kyu's inner thoughts during the process. Like you wrote, Yesung wasn't what Kyuhyun wanted but probably what Kyuhyun needed, and I fully agree with that. They are both complete opposite yet compliment each other in so many ways. Kyu can be rough/tough but does these little things that show that he really cares for Yesung.

I love how you got the snarky little comments in there, "The man was completely flat chested and had short tiny legs that seemed to say it was miracle he was standing." is something Kyuhyun could have said, especially the part about Yesung legs. I've said it so many times before but it seems like you know all their fears and little habits. You make them seem so life like, which makes it a pleasure to read your stories.
Harley_Quinn
#9
Chapter 1: Not the same sugary cuteness as usual but it was very interesting to see Kyu reflecting (mostly about s, lol) on everything that led them to now and I liked it. Kyuhyun and Yesung aren't what you would initially think would work but then you see how their personalities click and their undeniable natural friendship and that sweet spark of something beutifal and you become a fan girl for life lol. So cute too, Ye stealing Kyu's popcorn while he is thinking about what he wanted in a soul mate and what he got, which to be totally honest is pretty damn special~ Kyu should feel lucky (which I think he does) Yesung is an adorably weird catch.