Kaisoo (abused,used,)

Description

Kyungsoo is a normal 16 years old teenager he is popular in his school his teachers love him his grade are fantastic. he is known as a gently,sweet,kind and warm hearted person. one day this kid name  kim jong in for short kai had confessed his feelings towards kyungsoo and kyungsoo had accepted his love and they dated for months and finally became a couple,  they are together for almost 4 years kai loved kyungsoo so much , he has a manly personality  he doesn't like to share what's his and he has a short temper, so one day a kid in school confronted kyungsoo his name was sehun and told him he has feelings for him but kyungsoo had rejected him so they became close friends kai was aware of sehun's feelings towards kyungsoo so kai tries to tair kyungoo from his bestie(sehun). But one day kai change alot he started abusing kyungsoo,  getting drunk and him all the time, kyungsoo was davistated to kai's new self, kyungsoo was tired of living like that with kai so he told everything to sehun,  well sehun who has feelings for kyungsoo he straight away took kyungsoo  home  he doesn't want kyungsoo to get hurt anymore. after kai soobered up he was pissed because kyungsoo ran away. (this is basically a love triangle) . (:

Foreword

D.O's POV 

it was noon i  just got back from hanging  with my bestie sehun i was  exhausted, i walked pass the living room to go up stairs until i was stop of hearing someone cleared his throat i turned around to see kai  in the living room sitting on the sofa  with his arms crossed. "Where did  you go?". Kai asked kyungsoo in a angry tone. "i was with sehun, we were at the park".  i sayed in a soft voice. " Why the are you still hanging around with that dude, i told you not to hang with him anymore!". Kai sayed trying not to shout at me. "But kai.. he is my bestie."i said."since when did you start talking back???!". kai  grabbed my shoulder and sayed in an angry tone."Sehun is a good person kai, he is my bestfriend and i wont just abandoned  my bestie." i sayed in a soft serious tone. kai looked really angry when i sayed those  words , he pulled me by my hair and pulled me upstairs into the room and threw me onto the bed harshly. i looked at kai in shocked to see kai removing all his clothes and pants."K- kai.. what are you doing? i asked him and try not to sound scared. "  you need a lesson, i will punish you untill you understand who you belonged to.he got on top of he and started to strandle me while his hands trailing down my shirt swirling his fingers on my nippes i let out a soft whimper and try to push him off , he held my hands above my head firmly.  he started to kiss my  neck and rip my shirt off. i looked at him  with teary eyes.. "kai.. what's wrong with you.. stop this...". i sayed but i dint hear any response from him. he started to rip my pants and boxers off and started to rub my thighs while his lips , i looked at him with a scared expression.. " 

To be continue 

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chnamin
#1
This story looks really good!
Some words of advisement:
·Using proper capitalization can make a story
·Making whether its past or present tense clear helps the story flow more smoothly (is that correct grammar?)
·Using a variety of words that fit appropriately with the scene
·Good tags help popularity
Your story without the edits is still good. You don't even have to take my advice, I'm only a rookie. Just my opinion. I really do love this story regardless and hope you can update soon.
Kyumin #2
This seems nice, I'll be waiting for you to update it ^^