Taemin and Minho are visiting Taemin's umma and appa for the holidays but what happens when Taemin's baby decides to be born early and will it survive?
Ummm... constructive feedback, because you have potential. Old story, I know. At 39 weeks gestation, the baby is term and can be safely delivered. If the baby was kicking when Tae went into labor he wouldn't be stillborn, he'd have to die during the birthing process. Yeah, just do some research next time, cause there is potential in your writing.
Chapter 1: Tbh, it was kind of weird when the baby was 'lifeless' at first because he was still kicking when he's still inside Taemin's body. Anyway, they are really lucky to have a miracle happened! I'm happy for them :)
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