Reborn

Description

Chan Yeol, a decades-old vampire, meets a human girl who will test his control over his thirst.00

Foreword

Inspiration

This is my first attempt at a vampire story where a lot of the "vampiric" elements are based off the supernatural world of the TV show The Vampire Diaries and to a much lesser extent, the Twilight series. If you are familiar with either, you'll probably know what I used from which. Also, there are some historical scenes regarding the Japanese occupation in Korea that I gathered from the Korean drama Gaksital (Bridal Mask) and a Wikipedia article.

Conception

I first came up with the idea for this story around this time last year (December 2012). It started off as a one shot which I had a basic skeleton of an outline for and just had to fill in with complete sentences and dialogue. But after spending a few days on it and finding it to be more complicated than just typing words, I put it off until eventually I forgot about it altogether.

I rediscovered it a year later, and have decided to try and actually complete it. The plot has changed significantly, mostly because it's no longer a one shot. I think that was the problem I had the first time, trying to fit in the whole story in one chapter. It's now going to potentially be a short, multi-chapter story that I hopefully actually complete (because giving up a second time is really discouraging).

Final Author's Note

I hope I can keep you entertained with my story and as always, constructive criticism is welcome!

December 21, 2013, 8:24 PM

Comments

You must be logged in to comment
Yehet-my-Ohorat
#1
Chapter 3: Woah Kai is just like Damon and chanyeol like Stefan. Now for chanyeol to be human again he has be with neon Jung ah ;)
-mars-
#2
Is this...discontinued or something? :(
nasomi2011 #3
Chapter 6: Woah... It's not like I've never been mesmerized by your writing before, but... Wow. I love how you explain just enough so that we get an idea of the type of vampire you are talking about. And it's not just any vampire, but a specific kind. They are immortal, but not invincible. They can drink human blood and though that has benefits, self-control is difficult to maintain (at least it is for Chanyeol).

I am so excited to read your next update because, well, it's been a while since I've been interested in any supernatural fanfics. And as always, I love the way you write, so I guess that it's not surprising that I fell in love with this story right away. I hope that you are doing well! :)
dwylwyd #4
Chapter 6: Jung ah is paying alot of attention to chanyeol isn't she (;;;;
AlicePark #5
Chapter 6: Lol...
this seems cool...
bongkler
#6
Chapter 6: TT_TT OMG I CANNOT OMG
sojongined01
#7
Chapter 6: Aww~ Look at him, this little sly. I would really like to see you lose control.....
taebi_
#8
Chapter 6: Chanyeol you sly kid xD

I shall see and wait till you loses control and go crazy about Jung Ah /smirks

Thanks for updating!
missteddibear #9
Chapter 6: Aww, so cute Chanyeollie~ I like the farmer and chicken story and how you related it to Chanyeol and Jungah. Thanks for the update!
lulu_txy #10
Chapter 5: I knew it! LOL sneaky Chanyeol is not in the least bit sneaky. Amazing how Jung Ah noticed him not drinking his coffee and all. Doesn't that mean that she herself was observing him for the past 5 hours? *winkwink*