Chapter 1: Omggggg what is this even why is it so cute?! I love it. :D

Chapter 1: I want sequel.. Just make it chaptered.. Puhleaseee.. I love your story already..

Chapter 1: hey! just read your fic one more time (i had stop counting how many tiem i had read it! ^^) and i was wondering if you feel like writing a sequel to it?! lol i know it's too much to ask but i would really love to know if they will be together or if Chen did go to the coffe to see Lay again! but if you can't it's ok :-) i'll understand that! thank you again for the great fic! i just love Lay and Chen together and i love how you had made them first meet by accident and a kiss! love it! thank you :-)

Chapter 1: The fact that Yixing caught Jongdae just as he was about to fall and the fact that he asked for a kiss as a reward is just too cute.

Chapter 1: Ah, this was so fluffy.
"I scoffed but the author noticed that she was mostly trying not to grin like a fool."

Chapter 1: Aowww Baekyeol ! (imagine un chat faire un petit miaulement qui ressemble à un « baekyeol ! ») ah ce couple me met toujours en émoi ! Ils sont tellement... Tellement... Adorables ! Ils me font sourire jusqu'aux oreilles !
Bon, il arrive quand le lay tombé de son arbre ?
Non mais alors le baek qui saute sur chan ! J'adore ! C'est tellement eux lol. Et l'autre qui lui touche le cul, ben faut pas se gêner ! (ouais je suis souvent expressive dans mes commentaires...)
Aooooowwww BaekYeol !! C'était un peu guimauve mais ça va, c'est le baekyeol !
"Oh, please, forget what I just said, okay ?" the boy begged him, getting panicky. "I didn't mean it, I... No, wait, it's true, you're really hot but I... Uh... Yah, what am I saying ?!"
Mec... Tais toi, ça vaut mieux !
J'aimerai trop le voir en drama, genre au ralenti jongdae qui court vers lui pour l'embrasser, gros plan sur la tête de lay, à moitié surpris, à moitié rêveur et puis gros plan sur la tête de jongdae tout gêné !
Oh c'était mignon ! Un peu guimauve mais ça m'a bien fait sourire ! ^^

Just read your newest oneshot and when looking for more stories of you, I found this one. I've read this story like twice already but both times it was offline so I never commented on it. However, reading your newest oneshot, I think you deserve the comment I had on this story a 100% so here you go:

I really like this story because for starters it's ChenLay (they're my favorite otp at the moment) and then it's just cute and funny and the kisses made my stomach flip. Thanks so much! The world needs more ChenLay! <3

Chapter 1: Wooooooo this was super cute omg

Chapter 1: Seriously, this was do cute. I always need more Chanlay. And the fact that you made it the three beagles together was adorable. But Awww I had this smile when reading Chen and Lay together. (my bbs they are my biases!)
Ahh now I kinda want to ride my brother's skateboard once again. :3