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Okay, I've totally given up on layouts since they always look weird when I'm editing so goodbye to professionalism TT.TT

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So. You've somehow stumbled onto this weird shop, eh?

No, don't go away. You've come to the right place. I think. 

Now, I know that when someone writes a story, they love long comments. Everybody loves long comments. Especially the ones that help them with their writing instead of telling them to just 'update soon'.

This shop was created for a bored reader such as myself (and also the other many reviewers of this shop) to give you the critique you need and also to (hopefully) help you in improving your story somehow. 

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SM BATTLE ROYALE by LightningBender

Each school would have to participate. Class by class, they would be set against each other and from each class, there would be a winner. How would the winner be chosen? By killing. The classes would have to murder each other in cold blood before the one week deadline was up. One class at a time, the boy-girl pair left standing would be chosen to participate in the ranks of the Red Moon Army. 

It was a horrible solution, but it was a solution. So it was in sighs and many regrets that the government accepted Moon Heejun's plan and went to the first school. The city was once Seoul, now Beong Ae City, and it was Star Museum Academy, known as SM, home of thugs and to-be killers.

In 2301, the world is in chaos. The massive war known as the Black Star Civil War is killing more and more people each day and the human population is too high. Water is scarce, food is a prized item and death is common. Death tolls are getting higher each day. 

In what was formerly called South Korea before the First Black Star War hit in 2104, the Red Moon Empire resides. In what was the old North Korea is now the Black Star Empire, and this is where the war started.

The Red Moon Empire was the worst hit, and had no choice but to deploy more soldiers as their own ranks started falling through. 

But, rather obviously, not many people were keen to participate, having already many responsibilities bearing down on them. Even as the army swept through the Red Moon Empire looking for recruits, many would rather die at that moment than be struck down in battle. 

For some reason, even in this war, education managed to have a grip. In this, an aspiring general by the name of Moon Heejun proposed a plan: to pick the finest, and only the finest of students to fight. 


Reviewer's Note - If you are looking for some well-written gore, an interesting, deep and dark plot, awesomely developed characters and feelings you cannot describe, this is the story for you!

 

 

APPLE HAIR BOY by Me0wxx_

In which Sungyeol, the apple hair boy, is an absolute tease and where Myungsoo, who secretly hated that hairdo, is a shy little freak.

 

Reviewer's Note - This is a unique Myungyeol fic has lots of cute interactions and bits of humorous jokes that will bring a smile to your face. No angst at all, just a light-hearted plotline for your reading enjoyment.

 

 

THE BREAKING by Annyong

Jungkook has lived a typical, happy life; he has great friends, a wonderful family, and is about to have the best 16th birthday ever. But then he fails the testing and finds that he has what the government calls the Breaking, and now he belongs to them.

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This story is about a country where there is no such thing as freedom. The sytems, the government, the required worship, the fear. Add in the fact that when one turns sixteen, they must submit to government testing. What are they looking for? It's simple, really.
 
They want to know if you have the Breaking. They are afraid of those born with the genetic ability to do supernatural things, the ability to break their system and their rule. They want to control those with abilities and force them into servitude for their country.
 
Once one is found with the Breaking, their life as they knew it is over. Their family strikes their names from the records, they lose all human rights, and they are released into the state's care. They go through tests and torture, all to see what they can do. And once they are fully studied, they are left in their cells to die, too weak and broken to carry on. 
 
But now, the Broken will begin to challenge the system, use their abilities to crack the system. And one day they may even cause the Breaking everyone fears. But for today, they've had enough.
 
It is time for the Broken to rise.
 
 
Reviewer's Note - This story has a very unique plot that you won't be able to find elsewhere. The characters are as real as it gets and the story itself is like watching an entire movie in your head. If you're looking for a deep plotline and and an action-packed story, you better not miss out on The Breaking.



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IzzAlien
#1
Wait what? No more requests? Oh. I just requested xD
dyodoreu
#2
Requested :3 hehe
Seoul-dreamer
#3
Chapter 1: I requested. :3
Kirakishou27
#4
Chapter 29: Hiiiii I'm so sorry for being late with leaving a comment, but thanks soo much for the review! Oh, and thanks for taking the time to review it hehe
I'm glad that you found all my mistakes. I already know I made them, cuz' they're technically the exact same mistakes I make every time even in normal compositions and stories for school == But since I forget them within seconds, this was a good alarm bell for me. Like the commas and stuff? Yeah, haha, you honestly don't want to know how many teachers have scolded me for the same thing XD
To be honest, I really haven't watched Pandora hearts, never heard of it == But the weapons, yeah they're based on black rock shooter cuz those weapons left the biggest impression on me; I don't a sword or a ball of light is all that interesting anymore since its everywhere XD
As for sarcasm, I honestly don't remember when I wrote it cuz it's been such a long time since I've actually touched the story hehe. I know, I'm a total er at humour, so I don't try to add anything funny, because I'm not good at it hehe
Anyways, again thanks for the review! I know I'm not that good, and I might revamp it like I'm doing with every other fic I have. This story is so far the only story I haven't rewrote (not completely don't worry hehe) and have not tried to update for a long time. This review is really helping me to think more clearly, so BIG THANKS and looking forward to the review to my other story too XD
sueyachangjo
#5
Chapter 28: Hello, thank you for the review!

But I'm sorry if this was a torture for you >.<

Well, I was trying to achieve some sort of crack, black comedy ish sort of theme so please excuse the randomness of the antics being thrown in such as Shinhwa's immature habit and Hanneul's characterization. But I think I failed on that hahah.

But you pinpoint a lot of things that I overlooked and yes, it was a careless act on my part because I didn't go over it detailed enough.

Hanneul's main problem is Savant syndrome actually. Also, since she is an illegitimate child, she was kept hidden out of Jongyup's wife and son sights. Shinhwa only found out about her recently (except for Hyesung)
I planned on explaining more details in the later chapters but after reading your review, I think it's a good idea for me to hold back and rewrite the earlier chapters.

Thank you for the review. I really appreciate your inputs and I'm sorry if this was a torture for you. I'll credit to you soon.
astrdprtw #6
requested..
xxdaehyunxx
#7
Chapter 27: Hello. Thanks for the review! Credit would be done soon~