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Okay, I've totally given up on layouts since they always look weird when I'm editing so goodbye to professionalism TT.TT
*A-hem* Let's get started...
This is SHADOWS reviewshop.
Welcome, earthling.
✖ s h a d o w s r e v i e w s h o p ✖
So. You've somehow stumbled onto this weird shop, eh?
No, don't go away. You've come to the right place. I think.
Now, I know that when someone writes a story, they love long comments. Everybody loves long comments. Especially the ones that help them with their writing instead of telling them to just 'update soon'.
This shop was created for a bored reader such as myself (and also the other many reviewers of this shop) to give you the critique you need and also to (hopefully) help you in improving your story somehow.
So, what are you waiting for?
Throw us some requests.
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(TO THE REVIEWERS: If there is a story you want to be featured here, please PM me and let me know!)
✖ SM BATTLE ROYALE by LightningBender
Each school would have to participate. Class by class, they would be set against each other and from each class, there would be a winner. How would the winner be chosen? By killing. The classes would have to murder each other in cold blood before the one week deadline was up. One class at a time, the boy-girl pair left standing would be chosen to participate in the ranks of the Red Moon Army.
It was a horrible solution, but it was a solution. So it was in sighs and many regrets that the government accepted Moon Heejun's plan and went to the first school. The city was once Seoul, now Beong Ae City, and it was Star Museum Academy, known as SM, home of thugs and to-be killers.
In 2301, the world is in chaos. The massive war known as the Black Star Civil War is killing more and more people each day and the human population is too high. Water is scarce, food is a prized item and death is common. Death tolls are getting higher each day.
In what was formerly called South Korea before the First Black Star War hit in 2104, the Red Moon Empire resides. In what was the old North Korea is now the Black Star Empire, and this is where the war started.
The Red Moon Empire was the worst hit, and had no choice but to deploy more soldiers as their own ranks started falling through.
But, rather obviously, not many people were keen to participate, having already many responsibilities bearing down on them. Even as the army swept through the Red Moon Empire looking for recruits, many would rather die at that moment than be struck down in battle.
For some reason, even in this war, education managed to have a grip. In this, an aspiring general by the name of Moon Heejun proposed a plan: to pick the finest, and only the finest of students to fight.
Reviewer's Note - If you are looking for some well-written gore, an interesting, deep and dark plot, awesomely developed characters and feelings you cannot describe, this is the story for you!
✖ APPLE HAIR BOY by Me0wxx_
“In which Sungyeol, the apple hair boy, is an absolute tease and where Myungsoo, who secretly hated that hairdo, is a shy little freak.”
Reviewer's Note - This is a unique Myungyeol fic has lots of cute interactions and bits of humorous jokes that will bring a smile to your face. No angst at all, just a light-hearted plotline for your reading enjoyment.
✖ THE BREAKING by Annyong
Jungkook has lived a typical, happy life; he has great friends, a wonderful family, and is about to have the best 16th birthday ever. But then he fails the testing and finds that he has what the government calls the Breaking, and now he belongs to them.
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CREDITS TO THE OWNERS OF THE PICTURES USED.
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