broken notes (눈)

Description

 

Baekhyun is playing broken notes and Jongdae accompanies with unheard melodies.

Foreword

 

I’m sorry he left you.

 

I’m sorry I couldn’t be the one to comfort you.

 

And I’m sorry I can’t complete your song.

 

 


 

Hello everyone, all you lovelies who clicked to the broken title, thank you sweethearts!

This is an entry for Miracles In December | Oneshot Writing Contest.

Prompt; Baekhyun/Chen: Piano/Singing 

 

Edit 131212: It's already up guise! 3.5+ k words (if anyone would like to beta this that would be great!)

Edit 131214: Found myself a beta. I'll be putting up her as a co-author so she can help with editing the grammars and such. SHE WILL NOT UNDER ANY CIRCUMSTANCES TWEAK MY STORYLINE OR INTERFERE WITH IT. So guys, make way for Listening!

Edit 140102: Contest ended. Thank you everyone for the second place!

                    

So, as the contest suggests, it's gonna be angst guise. Even though I haven't written for like ages I think the music video deserves some justice to it and bam! A piece of mind was puked out.

Happy reading!

-butter

 

p/s: this should be up by friday

sungyeonaaah
second place guys! thank you for reading, subscribing, upvoting and comments!

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b-yundae #1
Chapter 1: I AM CRYING BLOOD
mychenshirecat #2
hello author-nim ~ Your story is so gooood TToTT And I really want to translate it into Vietnamese. Would you allow me ? TToTT
InkedPages #3
Chapter 1: Chenchen and Baekhyun, their love story is so heartbreaking. Especially the ending, the unheard harmony.
sleepingmins
#4
Chapter 1: Awin ahh!! >o< wae?! Wae?!! Baek will now never know chenchen likes him?!! What are you doing to me awin!! </3 my eyes are sweating! ;-; and i didn't know you won this haha congrats! <3 and still.... WAE!!
crazypeople
#5
Chapter 1: why chenchen havee to be dead ?? pity baekhyun . he's lonely ..... huhuu
TrollEyeliner
#6
Chapter 1: So sad. I'm crying when Chen is actually died :'( I've never cried like this bcuz this fanfic. Great job for making me cried. :'(
XiaoMei17
#7
Chapter 1: I'm crying. You made me crying. This is heartbreaking.
Mira2107xoxo
#8
Chapter 1: ;u; Im crying.... why chenchen need to be deas ?????? /sobs hand/
IntoTheNewWorld
#9
Chapter 1: This is so sad. T.T Crying right now.
spicastellar
#10
Chapter 1: I really hate you for making me cry this much!
I havent cry this much since 10080 T.T