Break Down

Description

Lonely and silent, Kang Daesung got through the days by wishing and dreaming of a friend who could hold him up - an impossible wish, surely, considering his lack of social skills. Constantly paranoid of everyone's intentions, he stuck himself behind a wall no one could break.

Then came along him.

 

Foreword

This was originally a eunhae story but I never continued it. And since today is the same day I registered onto aff a year ago, I thought "hey, why not write a story for that?". And so I did.

It's only fair that I dedicate it to the first kpop pairing I ever got into, and the reason I joined this community, right? That, and I can imagine todae in this situation. Now, I might update this today or tomorrow, I'm not sure. Uh. My laptop privilages are getting lesser, so I'm using as much time as I can to write this?

 

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MeADow12496 #1
Chapter 1: Its sweet that Seunghyun stayed and i really like the ending linking back to the stars. And btw, Cassiopeia always reminds me of Dbsk haha ( ^ω^)
lonerforever #2
Chapter 1: I feel like Daesung is totally myself at school.Quiet,and friendless.
And Seunghyun is so sweet!!!!!
Anyway,this story touches my heart.I love it so much!!!!!!!!
And thanks to this comment,I can now upvote a story!
LoneShiba #3
Chapter 1: OuO
this is beautiful.

BEAUTIFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUL! >W<

OMG, I COMPLETELY FELL FOR SEUNGHYUN (though I felt like smack him a little for saying those "Do you even have friends?" words... /smack seunghyun/)
oh well, but that's sweet..
SEUNGHYUN , ARE YOU HONEY?

they went to the roof and saw stars together...

/melts away/

THANKS FOR SHARING <3
Megami284 #4
Chapter 1: This was beautiful to read.
diamondgurl88
#5
Chapter 1: Daesung in this story is me lol so painful to read yet couldn't stop myself.

Seunghyun was a good boy, he tried to understand daesung. It was just daesung who being stubborn all the freakin time.
I just want sundae friendship to go back to how it used to be..

Anwys, that was waaayyyyyy too good. I love how this story went and yup, liking the way you characterized Daesung in here so much! ^^
MizzOgawa
#6
Chapter 1: I enjoy this story and I can totally relate myself with Daesung.
Just that I was hoping that this could be a bit longer hahaha XD
sereri
#7
Chapter 1: I want to see happy Daesung...
IndigoGrey #8
Chapter 1: That kills me see him like that. So down (depression?) and constantly on the defensive. Even without the romantic angle between todae, I still enoyed the small instances of bonding (lol @ Dae's reaction to the ice cream). Hope he builds his confidence up and develops a better friendship with SH. Not sure if I want him to be friends with Youngbae since it really does seem like he ditched him for others.

Yes, that is hurtful to tell someone they don't have friends or ask them in a nasty way if they have any :(
Gabahbahbleh01
#9
Chapter 1: I can relate with this... I'm rereading this again and again because this is just too beautiful. The feeling of your only friend slowly drifting apart from you and leaving you alone is painful, and this fic explains that pain really well.
This deseeves to have a sequel. Just sayin' . Hehe
Applepi #10
Chapter 1: I think this resonated a little with me. Oh god is that a tear in my eye . This was beautiful I really enjoyed reading it, I only wish for it to be longer though. Thank you for gracing us with such a beautiful fic, I think it has potential to be a few more chapters long or even a multi fic. Anyway always a fan of your writing I can't wait to see more of your work :)