Pieces Of Love

Description

The fire that used to be burning in our relationship is now extinguished; leaving only ashes as black as soot.

Foreword

She took pieces of me with her when she goes.

I left pieces of me with him so he could care.

 

 

 

“Oppa, do you keep true to your promise?”

“I do."

"I hope you could keep your promise in the future."

 

 

 

 

 

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This is my first time trying an angst. So, please support and give your opinion.

 

 

 

          ©Story written by InfinityGirl          

                                  

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Comments

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jessica98 #1
This story is a blast! Love it so much:)
SamanthaSuju #2
This story deserve more views <3
LadyofReincarnation
#3
Chapter 1: This story was absolutely stunning and it portrayed a lot of life events that I could relate to. It is sad to stay in a relationship in which both partners are struggling to get back to their 'honeymoon' phase, but it's the nature of life. I do support her leaving the marriage because their life has come to a dead end and the best solution and would benefit both of them in the future. Time apart this time and Sehun knowing that Minji will never be coming back will awaken his love for her and she might have the same effect.
I would recommend a sequel since I look forward to see how far they have come along after splitting up. It might be nice to see them gradually become friends again and see how life has gotten for them. There should be personality changes to direct readers in a way that the character has learned from their mistakes. Sehun and Minji should be more humble and polite in the future and have pleasant feelings and meetings. I'm sorry, this story just sprouted a new story in my head that won't be written out XD
I enjoyed it! It was thought-provoking and simple. Quite a tug of the heart, but durable.
violet_
#4
it's sad. really. i'm full with curiousity right now. what's wrong with both of them? why they're leaving?
were they're newlywed-- and they have some misunderstanding? ; n ;
will them will be back for each other? what's the ending for them? ; o ;
aaaaa i wanna cry but idk for the reasons. i wanna feel some pain like both of them feels, but but when i read it and i couldnt find their reasons make me frustrated. ; ; sequel for this story please. HAHAHAHAA
caelestis_
#5
Chapter 1: oh gosh. that last bit really got to me ; ;
this was really good, though i do agree with the comment below, i didn't really get why they had to leave each other haha.
but still, it's really nice so good job c:
lydiakardinal
#6
Chapter 1: this bit sad but i didn't understand what they problem why she left? why sehun call her immature? i think if they sit and talk heart to heart they marriage still can be save... btw this story best..
KMH_0628 #7
and yaaas this too hahaa
minxdahye94
#8
Chapter 1: I don't understand... What is it their marriage problem?? Why did they did sit down and talk about their problem like what adult should do?? They are both immature... They are both at fault... If they talk about it, they can safe their marriage... xoxoxo
Panda143BubbleTea
#9
Chapter 1: asdfghjkalsh WHY WHY WHYYYY????
ukisslover26
#10
Chapter 1: This is so sad, I'm crying right now :(