Chapter 1: Do you know so hard it is for me to refrain myself from squealing out my feels over this fluffy and beautiful fic? OMFG This is so beautifully written. I can almost feel the winter (my country isn't a 4-season country), smell the scent of the coffee shop, feel the warm fire. oh gosh, this is just light and beautiful. It's so pleasant to read and it gives me feels. I just covered my face with my hands because I was blushing at the cuteness of this story. Thank you for sharing such a lovely story. ♥
Chapter 1: Also, I think the title could be better but if it has a sentimental meaning to you then please ignore this :D hehe I had a doubt to read this because of the tittle at first. after I finished reading I still dont get why the title, but maybe thats cz im not observant enough. hehe I just want to help cz I think its kindof underrated sobs it deserves so much more
Chapter 1: “baby please come to bed” // I'm bye bye
love at first sight stories are always interesting and add Christmas I'm done its pink and rainbowey and despite all the sweetness I love how your words flow very easily, unhurried and lightly like:
"the song fades away and the only sound is the firewood crackling in the fire. baekhyun gazes at kyungsoo and the latter returns the same loving look in his doe eyes, the words written all over their expressions. pale skin meets wandering hands, and flushed bodies move against one another, unhurriedly in a concerto of felicity and paradise. soft sighs and gasps met with whispers of promise and confession in the ambrosial night." // This paragraph is /perfect/, is my favorite part, like my favorite paragraph of all baeksoo I've read. ever.
"bells tinkle as the older boy leads the younger into a shop with comforting orange lights and christmas carols playing in the background." // I can /clearly/ imagine they walked inside and baek with his graceful steps pulling Soo along with him?? no waste of word, (Its probably not a big deal to people especially if theyre native speakers but i find it hard to do, so /shrugs/) and You're really really good at this??? teach me your ways please??
And yeah its not heavy and I like them fic not heavy so I love your shot. Its beautiful and sorry if Im overboard with this but you gave me feels and I can't help it. I really, really really like it here have my heart <3
Chapter 1: omggggggGgGggG
this is so cute like i cannot stop smiling could this just happen irl juseyo snfnckckdd.
i was surprised by the lack of lee soo man tho bb. xc
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