The Last Petal

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A moment of separation.

Strong enough to make him burst into tears but far too weak to break his love for her.

Yet, enough to make it all over.

 

18th January 2012

The flower only has some petals left. No, I’m not giving in.

-KimSera-

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Foreword

 

Author’s note

Hey this is lissamary and I’m bringing you my very first oneshot called ‘The Last Petal’. I got the idea to write this story when I was on my way, having a car trip to my village (met my beloved grandpa and grandma!). This story doesn’t come from my life experience, it is purely an imagination. Other than that, I’m really sorry if I disappoint all of you with my horrible writing skills ( jeongmal mianhae~ ._.). I tried to improve okay but I think I really don’t have the talent hahahahah. I think it’s enough with my nonsense now, happy reading and do drop some comments if you want to!

Sincerely,

lissamary

 

Credits to NurulAina (http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/100059 ) for the amazing poster! I really like it :'D You know that I love simplicity the best ahahhah xD Thanks a lot for your help ^^

 

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Comments

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KPOPMonstahh #1
Chapter 2: Hey you meanie.
Excited at the news over here lol
What are you going to do to poor baby Lay now huh?
Waiting forward :)
yejiapsaranghaja
#2
Chapter 1: Oh my gash this story is brilliant! T____T
This is seriously amazing <3 I love it!

(btw, the poster is so pretty! :D)
G-yongxx
#3
Chapter 1: this is a really beautiful story. it managed to made a few tears drop lol. this is really sad but i really loved it idk but i have a thing for angst fics, so it would be great if u write more angst fics /whispers kris pls/ (just kidding) however i just want to say that u are an amazing author, i love the way u write this story it is indeed has been beautifully written. hope to see a lot more amazing stories from u <3
KPOPMonstahh #4
Chapter 1: That was awesome!
Thanks fot recommending this fic to me! I would regret ignoring it! Thank God I didn't.
Truth be told, I like EXO but I'm not crazy about them; so I haven't actually thought of 'stalking' Lay before.
But after this, I'm totally searching for him in Wikipedia. Hahah!
You're such a talented writer and I want to see more fictions from you.
Not angst please. This one is enough feels for one day. Lol!
Can I request a Key and Eunji?
I love your writing style and I'm a big Jongkey fan.
But I think you'll totally suit making Key as a manly dude with Apink's Eunji. Can ya'?
It's fine though. I just want to tell you how awesome of an author you are.
Poor Sera. She'll always be in Lay's heart.
Sorry for the humongous length of comment.
P.S love the asking for direction bit. Hilarious!