Chapter 1: Awwwww !!! My heart was beating so fast when they had a kiss on their lips. Nice shot !!! Imagen if this are really2 happen in their real life.. Omg ! I'm sure they will be the famous popularity cute couple ever. Not fake ! Argh.. I wish it'll come true on someday. :)

Chapter 1: Well done on your first fanfic! It's pretty good as it is but I'm sure you'll get better and better! Keep writing! :) more MC fabrics please haha