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❘❙ ❚ ʉosɬ͖ᴀǀG!ɑ ‖ S M & Y G's COLLABORATION CO-ED GROUP ❘❙ ❚ a p p l y o p e n

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ALOISDA | CelESTE |
 

LEE SUMIN ♀

THaNK YOU FOR BEING My first applicant!  TO Start off,  I really love your scene suggestions  (Especially, about nostalgia having their own tv show.).  SUmin is a very sweet character and seems like a likely candidate for the "Maknae" position in a "Controversial" band.  She most certianly is a angel with a dark side. I don't  see any problems with your application.  4 "X's" for you :)

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piscesdog | elainE |
 

LEE JaeRin ♀

THaNK YOU FOR Applying boo :) Alright, here we go!  To start off, I love the variety of different personalities i'm receiving for this applyfic. your character certainly brings out the "happy" and "cheeky" side of the group.  but, i also love how she looks cold; it fits the group's persona.  I'D LOOK FORWARD TO SEEING HER AS THE MAIN RAPPER OF "Nostalgia".  Lastly, I'm not a fan of Idol sibling because it dosen't  allow the character to stand on it's own. but, in your case i'll let it slide :P    3  x's  for You!

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-fullmetal | dana |
 

Yoon hyun jae ♀

What's up? can i start off by saying i love your character so much!  bree's kind of a jerk; I love that!  nostalgia's in need of a member who's not afraid to say what they think and hyun jae does just that.  I'm also glad that you decided to add a more to your app. after reading bree's background, I see where her personality comes from. does she change by the end of the story? however, i don't want to feel like I'm nitpicking at your app but, i feel like all of your positions and back-ups are backwards. such as, bree looks and acts more like the face of the group more than the pianist, she also sounds more like a yg trainee than a sm trainee and lastly, yuri is more of a lead dancer  if you are using her for a dance claim. but, these just suggestions not demands . 4x's for you!   ✖  ✖  ✖ ✖

 

 

 

 

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ayowaddupkrease #1
Thank you for your kind review! He's a very versatile person... He'd let anyone he trusts to do anything they wanted with him, (even treat him like a dog!) so use him as you wish! It's most likely that it would be in-character for him anyway. I wish you luck with the story!!
travxsty #2
Chapter 1: hi thanks for the review (even though i'm not sure if you're done with it already or not) but to answer your question, yes hyunjae will change by the end of the fic but it won't necessarily be a huge change. personally i think the change shouldn't be too dramatic since its OCC. anyway, if you have checked - dance twins have been changed from yuri to eunji. I apologise if my twins were too strong previously, i had just started out and was new to everything. also, i place her as a pianist (Instead of the face) because someone like her should not be placed under the spotlight to protect the group from bad press. so ya, hope this answer your queries
schneizel #3
Chapter 2: is there an age limit?
-mayvees #4
hey, thought that i should inform you first; but anyway, i'm pulling out of this story. i accidentally deleted the application while doing a application clearing thing. but yeah, you can take my character out of the trainee page.
piscesdog #5
Chapter 1: Thank You for the reviews ... I'm happy that you like it =D
SooWook13_SK5HaeSica #6
Can the face claim be idol?
AloisDA #7
Chapter 1: Thank you for the kind review! ^ ^
I'm happy you liked her
hommage #8
is applying for siblings and not twins (boy and girl) alright?
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