Devastation [Under editing] [First Chapter will be uploaded after I'm just a fan gets uploaded]
Description
Luhan walks down from the rooftop, now with his eyes soulless, his lips pale.
The former spark in his eyes can't be seen anymore, for it had been extinguished.
A once inspired fanboy is now devastated, devastated to the point of destruction.
Oh how he wishes to end his life together with his suffering for it was Oh Sehun who said it to him, he wouldn't stand a chance.
He's lost.
Foreword
this would be my sequel for I'm just a fan
So I did this to show what happens once a fan was purely devastated by sudden happenings
And in Luhan's case in this story, devastation was lower than how he felt
So I hope you could wait for the next Chapter since I am busy this days and I just did this to settle things out
[Update 7/4/2015]
hello, this has been published and finished ages ago, but reading back, there are so many grammatical errors, there are too many I can't even enumerate them, plus the verb uses, so yeah, I'd like to edit this, hopefully, this will become more beautiful and whatnot ^^
Edit 06/11/2017:
So I was saying that I was gonna edit this wayyyy back in 2015, however, the idea was dropped because of the unexpected turn of events.
So here I am, apologizing profusely for abandoning that plan, and promising that I will be editing this properly this time, and hopefully, finish it within 2 weeks, before my classes starts.
I will be posting the revamped first chapter after I'm done editing I'm just a fan.
~ LeilaLynnS (2017)
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