Distance [ Song-Shot ]

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Synopsis - -

I once believed that maybe pushing you away, would make the pain go away...

But in the very end... You'd end up hurting yourself more...

Just please turn away and never look back.

I'm in love with SHINee's beloved rapper; the Charismatic Flame Choi Minho. Yeah, me and the rest of the female population of the East (and probably the West too). So, it seems normal, right?

No. I've committed a sin.

I'm actually in love with Choi Minho...

My younger brother.

Genre - -

Angst and Romance

Song Used - -

I'll Back Off So You Can Live Better
G.NA ft. Junhyung from B2ST

Author's Comment - -

Decided to do another one-shot; this time it features You and Choi Minho~ Dear Gawd, how I loooooooove that boy. Even if he's younger than me... LOL! Anyway, I got this idea from watching a trailer of a fanfic that I applied my character to... And she's paired with Minho. (VERY first time seeing one of my characters in a fanfic trailer... ._. And it feels AWESOME!) And the trailer had this song (mentioned above)... And something just clicked!

I apologize if this concept offends you in anyway (I know, I'm a very sick minded person at the moment...)... But please, don't ruin it for me or anyone else. If it bothers you... Then don't bother reading it. It's simple, it's plain and it's common sense.

BTW yes, I just made up that term... Song-Shot. A one shot with a song put into it. LOL!

As for those of you who are curious and end up clicking on that huge "NEXT" text in the bottom corner of your screen (or when it gets there at least... ) ... Please enjoy the story and comments/reviews are always welcomed!

=DD

Foreword

Taste Test - -

Sitting in the dark and very lonely corner of my room... I continued to cry in my pathetic feeble position; my legs pressed up against my chest while both my hands held onto my head, barricading my ears from any noise.

I just wanted to curl up under a rock and just lay there... Rotting away. I was doomed to hell anyway... I was going crazy. My mind was telling me how disgusting, dirty and sinful I was; however, my heart was telling me otherwise.

What should I do? I was completely torn. Should I listen to society and just end my misery right now...? Or should I listen to my heart and try to find some way to work it out? Either way... I knew I wasn't going to be completely happy.

Of all people in this damn world... Why did I have to fall in love with my younger brother...?

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pearl-blue-diva #1
Chapter 1: so im actually quite glad i clicked on the "random story" button! i kinda squealed when I first saw "Minho" cuz akabswnndsn xD
it's quite a lovely story. though the ending left me kinda sad. bittersweet story! I really like the song you used as well!
and what an intriguing subject : . I never really grasped the concept (and probably never will) but it's interesting!

I dont even mind that it's past 5am!!

good
job!
also. uugghhaisbqibsis choi minhO
goodnight !
Joyvin #2
Love this fic!
kpopmaniac890 #3
Speechless...'I love this' is all i can say..
siwon- #4
KEFMKWLGMEKLMSLKDGMSLKDFMWEALSKMLKWGMWLKRGMWLKMWSEKLFDMSDLKFMSDLK .<br />
THOSE FANGIRLS ARE SO MEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN .
nanathedirewolf #5
good job!
hyeamazing #6
This is such a sad fic. Argh, Minho why did you leave? You should've stayed! *SOB*, I miss you =[ Lawl!<br />
This is a really good fanfic, i hope to read moreee~ <333
Jindiy #7
I love this! Its kinda a bit twisted since its sort of like ? but its still good! ^^
chasethestars #8
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You also have punctuation errors and misuses in some places [e.g. "To put it in simpler terms; I, Choi _____ am in love with my younger brother, Choi Minho.' -- you can replace the semicolon with a comma], and you tend to use too many ellipses [e.g. "I was mentally preparing myself for him to shove me and calling me some sort of... Sick abomination or something of that nature." -- you can omit the ellipsis in this sentence because it will get the message across even without it]. There were minimal word confusions [e.g. "guilty conscious" -- I think you meant "conscience"?] and haven't spotted any spelling errors so far so props to you on that one =D<br />
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All in all, I have to say it was an interesting read =D Not many venture into this kind of territory in fanfic writing and most of what I've seen under this category in this fandom sadly do not deliver, in my opinion ^^;; The drama and angst elements were moderately high in this but thankfully they didn't kill the story. I hope I didn't offend you with anything I said x_x I also apologize if this comment is too long for your liking ^^;; To wrap it up, you did a good job and I hope to read more from you in the future =D
chasethestars #9
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Hello~ =3<br />
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I just discovered this one-shot today when I was sifting through a number of stories and I instantly thought of a couple breaking up when I saw the title + short summary before clicking on the link. Imagine my surprise when I found out I got more than what I bargained for at the hinted sensitive premise of the story XD I have no qualms with said premise [in fact, it is something I enjoy and find fascinating in fiction so you're not alone in the sick department ^^;;] so I continued reading~.<br />
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The thing that impressed me the most was the ending. It wasn't concluded in the typical way like most stories that had an airport scene for the finishing touch [and even if I wanted it to, they'd get into loads of trouble XD], making it as clear as day to her that they are and will always be star crossed lovers. It's a painful truth she has to come to terms with and perhaps a burden she will have to bear until the end of her days. There is enough backstory to cover the whys and hows of their current predicament and that sweet but short-lived moment of Minho telling her he was leaving the next day is probably what I consider one of the more heartrending highlights of the entire story.<br />
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I have concrit to offer, though. Since this was labeled as a "one-shot" I honestly thought it was going to be that, but seeing lyrics in the middle of the story made me wonder if you somehow mislabeled your story and meant "songfic" instead. I think it would be better if you took out the song lyrics because it's distracting and the flow would be much better that way ^^;; I understand that the song and/or lyrics might fit the overall mood of the story, but there is nothing wrong in providing a link to the song at the beginning or end of the story for those who are not familiar with it =3
xAeRin #10
NOOOOOOO ! thats not fair D:<br />
okay that was a great one-shot !<br />
<3. really intense .
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