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helloooooo ~ 

umm , so here i am again with my second fiction .. yaay !! i have never thought that i would write my second fic after about a year but i wrote this one cuz it's inspired by my real life 

hope you will give my second fic a chance and plz let me know what you think about it

 

 

Foreword

He got the perfect smile but it’s hidden , he got the most cute soul but it’s hurt , and he got the most wide heart but it’s broken 
 
You are going to be the best new neighbour to the boy who lives next door , you’re going to let him borrow your smile , but what would happen if he borrowed your smile and stole your heart at the same time ? What would happen when you get so weak in front the new smile he drew to himself ? ..
 
 
 

Characters

Zelo -- > He's cold , lazy , arrogant , unfriendly , rude , likes to stay alone and he is faithful to his crew .

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you -- > you're fun , cute , not too tall , 100% friendly and you are a true full best friend 


p.s --> cuz i know you're way more beautiful than just a "perfect image at google" i decided to draw your image as the perfect "you" inside your head , be creative .. be YOU <3

 

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Sehun  --> you're ex , in love with you , he acts like he's your brother and he takes a good care of you .

 

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and others you'll know at the fic !
 

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Zelolayswife
#1
Chapter 19: Arghhh !! Zelo oppa kissed my cheeks !, AQ DINEIXNKSNSIENKSMO!! MY FEELZ ARE EXPLODING !!
Zelolayswife
#2
Chapter 18: Awwww, so sweet !! zelo oppa is soooo sweeettt ~
Zelolayswife
#3
Chapter 16: Whhaattt ?!?!?! I was in total FEELZ reading this fanfic!!!!!!
And then you/I said that i loved sehun?! ?!?!? No!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Poor zelo oppa !!!!!!!!,
Zelolayswife
#4
Chapter 14: What ?!?!? Zelo oppa asking me to call him oppa ?!?! Omg!!! I want to faint right now !!!by the way, that's a really cute gif !!!!!!!!!!!!
Zelolayswife
#5
Chapter 13: Wahhhhhhh, great story soo farrr !!!! O.M.G !! I could just imagine zelo oppa giving me his jacket !! OMG !!!!!!
MsDaehyuntokki #6
Chapter 12: Update soon authornim
Confuseshogo
#7
Update Soon ^^