BAP and a Toddler

Description

What happen when BAP need to babysit a toddler ?

BAP won the New Rising Star award in Golden Disks Awards. TS Entertainment gave them a day off from their busy and pack schedules as a reward form working hard for half of the year. That night, Zelo’s sister asked them to babysit Zelo’s nephew, Minho for half of a day and BAP agreed.

 But Minho came to BAP’s dorm unexpectedly early in the morning.

“Minho, behave yourself! I’m going to pick you up in the afternoon.” Minho’s mom said to Minho. She inserted the password on the security door lock. Zelo gave the password to his sister.

(BAP’s security door lock)

“Yes, mom!” Minho nodded. Minho’s mom opened the door and they bid farewell.

 

no silent readers

Foreword

Author Note: 

I wrote this story months ago for my English class project. The motive of my class project was to improve our grammar etc etc in writing.

I decided to post it here because I thought you guys can help me by dropping your comments about my story, grammar, sentences etc. so I can improve myself.

Obviously, I'm a newbie so I'm totally lack in everything and still learning so do bare with me.

 

  • This story is based on my imagination.
  • If my storyline is the same as yours that mean we have a telepathy!! No i mean A BIG COINCIDENCE!

 

Character

 

BAP

6 spoilt aliens

 

Sunhwa

Zelo's big sister

A single mother

 

Minho

Sunhwa's son

4 years old

Zelo's nephew but he called BAP as hyungs

 

Enjoy yourself with BAP And A Toddler

no silent readers please

 

Comments

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Dubiaku #1
Chapter 1: Wow. The wakeup part was so long and boring that I almost fell asleep myself. No way that I'm reading any more - I might end up in a coma.