Chapter 1: i reread this again and im still awed by it just like how i found this from few years back. but until now i still cant figure the ending. was myungsoo the killer? did he try to kill himself? what's his connection with suzy? lol. but swear ur stories are one of the bests!
Chapter 1: This won my heart <3 I am a heavy angst reader, an angst-addict you can call me. Your writing is simply beautiful. Keep up the excellent work dear!
this was so insane and beautiful. it makes me breathless while reading. the way you created a suspense in your story, slowly bringing us to the and leaving us with an unexpected yet mind-blowing ending was just amazing. this is definitely the kind of story i will enjoy.
the plot, your writing style, portrayal of your characters and descriptions were done flawlessly. the only thing i would hope for is the revelation of the ending - who is suzy and who is the killer.
an excellent piece of writing that really deserve the first prize. congrats!
I just read this, but this is really mindblowing like there's no words that can explain how I feel now. The ending makes me perplexed but that's just part of your mystery which makes your story even unpredictable. The angst, mystery and cliffhanger are right on spot. Thank you for sharing this story with us Author-nim! :) And I wish you luck for the contest.
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