For a First Date I Wouldnt Have Picked Better

Ten Ways to the Seoul [hiatus]

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suddenly Kimy came down bouncing

'ladies and gentlemen!' she announced to an imaginary audience the two brothers stopped their wrestling

'INTRODUCING PARK YIIING!' Kimy shouted and gestured towards the stairs where Charlotte stood shyly

the two boys eyes widened......... 

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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~..... the boy's eyes did a slow-motion look at Charlotte starting with her feet to her shoulders
wearing a cute floaty shirt which gave her skin a fair glow black denim shorts which showed off her legs.
she was holding a white bag with her hand which was covered in 5 golden design bangles

hair hair was in a soft up do like this:

 

  irgnore the clothes please just focus on the hair -.-

Charlotte was biting her pale pink lips and blinked her eyes which seem to shine and was outlined perfectly

'do..do i look okay?' Charlotte asked worridly and walked down the stairs

'you dont look okay, you look AWESOME!' Kimy exploded and hugged Charlotte at the bottom of the stairs

'right KiKi?' Kimy nodded at Jae Ki who has recovered

'y-you look great Charlotte im surprised, you dont normally wear err things like that;' Jae Ki said glanced at her bare legs and looked away blushing

'see even KiKi agrees' Kimy giggled and gave Jae Ki a hug too

'Hwa? say something' Jae Ki nudged his brother who up till now had his mouth wide open

'e-erm what?' Hwa snapped out of it

'Charlotte. what. do. you. think?' Kimy stared at Hwa for his opionion

'tch she just looks the same ug- OW!' Jae Ki kicked his brother

'i-i m-mean the same usual not that attractive self tch' Jae Hwa said and turned away sharply

'you kept us here for that? tch waste of my time' Hwa said without looking back and headed to the door he jerked the door open and there stood Sun. hand raised ready to knock on the door and in his other hand was one rose.

'oh hey is Charlotte-sshi here?' Sun asked smiling brightly

~~~~~~*Jae Hwa's POV*~~~~~~~~

I turned away quickly did she have to show so much skin?

thought you liked 'skin'? you sure seen girls with more skin than that

shut up conscience what are you doing here?

just making a point. you LIKE her

do not now shut up!!! but the image of Charlottes glowy self made blood rush to my cheeks WTF?!?! im Jae Hwa girls fall for ME not the other way around. i headed to the door and yanked it open and there stood a guy with red hair wearing plaid jacket over a plain red shirt skinny jeans and converses.

 

 

isnt that?

'oh is Charlotte-shhi here?' he smiled more like smirked

i widened my eyes it is him! dont tell me he's-

'Oh! Sun your early!' Kimy appeared behind me and smiled at sun 'here she is!' and pushed Charlotte out the door who accidently fell unfortunatly Sun caught her in his arms

'oops careful' he looked down and smiled at Charlotte he gave Charlotte the rose and grabbed her hand 'lets go our carriage awaits' he made a gesture to one of those bicycle cars

Charlotte giggled and blushed red they walked down and the path and got in the thing they then err cycled off?

the door slammed in my face and i heard Kimy squeel behind me

'AAHHH!! i hope he treats her right, first date with a hottie Charlottes lucky' Kimy blabbered on about sun and who he is i dont know why but my blood boiled.

'hes not as perfect as you think' i growled and made my way out again Jae Ki grabbed my wrist

'hyung what do you mean dont ruin it for her' Jae ki whispered and nodded towards the kitchen where Kimy was making food for them.

'hes not as he seems, just leave it just have a nice diner date with Kimy' i smirked at jae ki's red face and i made my way out.

i ran to the bus im going to find that other girl and ask her all about him. soon the familair bus approached and i boarded on.....

~~~~~~~~meanwhile with Sun and Charlotte~~~~~~~~~
--------------------------------Charlotte's POV-----------------

He's soo sweet! and hes a gentlemen i thought as Sun held out his hand to help me out of the bicycle cart we had a laugh pretending it was our horse to creat a more romantic feeling we also joked and got to know each other.

we bicycled to a picniciky park which i think was like 20 minutes away from Lammy's shop if i remember correctly she brought me here when we were younger I smiled

'what you thinking about?' Sun asked me giving me a killer smile i could die literalyy

'nothing just how this park looks beautiful'

it was still noonish and the heat from the sun is gone so the air was humid but not too much and the light was still there

'well not as beautiful as you' Sun said and i blushed  hes soo sweet a much better sweet-talker than Jae Hwa

I remebered how his attempt to sweet-talk me was an epic fail...hang whats that erted jerk doing in my head??

i shook my head lightly Sun laughed at me

'haha what's up angel? got something in your eye?'

'n-no' i stuttered IDIOT! metal slap

'let me see' Sun grabbed my chin and  turned it towards his face my eyes widen his face looked really..handomse up close his soft eyes were looking into mine then his eyes just made its way to my lips and he slowly came closer i closed my eyes and so did he he was getting closer and closer my heart pounding......

 

 

 

 

 

 

'OI YOU KIDS MOVE IT!'

We jumped away from each other and a grumpy old man pushed past us.

we stood in silence and laughed Sun grabbed my hand and made our way through the park intill we came near the pond.

near it on the floor was a picnic blanket with food and candles i gasped in wonder and turned to a smiling Sun

'did you do this?' i asked and he chuckled

'course i did who else? the park fairies?' he laughed at my expression i should stop blushing he carefully did this gentlemen way of sitting me down he chuckled and fed me some friend kimichi

'hope its still warm' i ate a bit and gasped

'OMO its the best' i giggled at Sun's expression for a moment he was shocked we just laughed and talked.

this has probably been the best i dont know.... 2 hours and 30 mins of my life!! im in heaven. Sun made to feed me again he opened his mouth as well and said

'say aaahhh angel' he smiled and i ate it i think i could die happy

'Yah!' suddenly i felt someone grab me and pull me back i looked up there was another girl....havent i seen her before?....OMO its that other girl we were interviewing but she went out she glared at me then turned to a expressionless-Sun

'what do you think  your doing?' she demanded 'with her?' she pointed a finger at me

'w-we're on a  d-date' i stuttered i frowned at Sun 'right Sun?' he looked at me and got up

he took hold of the other girl's hands and looked her in the eye

'she's just a friend nothing more, your my yebo, my only yeobo, My angel' he smiled and so did the other girl they then just turned away and left me alone i was shocked

shes just a friend

shes just a friend

it kept playing in my head i was nothing more than a toy and i was used......how could i be so stupid?

my heart felt it just shattered into pieces i closed my eyes and curled up hugging my knees i felt tears run down my cheeks

'im such a babo' i said through my teeth 'no guy would like me anyway they're all idiots'

' one yeah you are a babo two dont blame all guys some of us are decent'

i shot my head up someone was sitting beside me i looked at him

'how and when did you get here?' i spat.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~AUTHORS POV*~~~~~~~~~~

'oh come on dont be like that' Jae Hwa pouted 'i was being nice keeping yyou company'

'pch really? so your not here to insult me? about being dumped and stuff?' Charlotte rubbed her eyes angrily

'hey dont do that! you'll make your eyes sore' Jae Hwa nagged and pushed Charlottes hands away and carefull y wiped her tears with his sleeve carefully

'there stop crying your more ugly if your crying' he smirked at her

'YAH!' Charlotte laughed and hit Jae Hwa on the shoulder 'shut up you ert!'

Hwa smiled 'now thats the stupid girl i know' and he chuckled

they sat in silence for a while

'Hwa?' Charlotte asked while dazing off in the horizon

'mm?' Hwa looked at Charlotte "she never called me Hwa before" he thought

'thanks'

'bwoh?' Hwa was stunned

'you know for being nice to me ..so far just dont do your ert things on me' Charlotte meekly smiled

'Never should of gave hope about Sun' she sighed 'guys like that woldnt have real inteest in me'

'yah dont talk like that' Hwa said softly

'you can do better than that Jerk like Sun'

'you think so?'

'if you can do better than erts like me than sure as hell you can do better than that jerk'

Hwa smiled and playfully nudged Charlotte who smiled

'thanks'  she smiled at Hwa ' you know if you werent such a ert i might atually would have liked you' she mumbled

'what?' Hwa asked

'nothing' Charlotte smiled and got up 'i still have time before i go home want to come to the night market with me?'

'tch with you? i wouldnt be caught dead' Hwa scoffed

Charlotte laughed 'too bad you've been nice to me, now its my turn to be nice to you' Charlotte pulled Hwa up and dragged him away

'YAH! i already ran today!' but you can hear the laughter in his voice.

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*Jae Hwa's POV*

i sat uncomfortable next to the girl i cant remeber her name or whatever i was too angry that player but i know she was at an interview as well next time we'll meet i'll ask again.

she was angry too that Sun-guy better not have hurt her hes a jerk

okay i know im a jerk and a erted one but i never two-time i usually dump before i look for another hook-up

i dont know why i care so much Charlotte's old enough...but the thought of her being hurt just...makes me feel...urgh jealous? no envious? no urgh dont tell me im atually caring. before i knew it we arrived i got off just behind her

'urgh how we gonna find them?' i grunted

'i know exactly where he is he better not be two-timing me with a ' she hissed and she ran off

'w-wait!' i ran after her dammit running twice in one day??

i lost her dammit but i asked some people if they seen her or maybe Charlotte i asked this old guy and he just moaned about a park then point towards this park

i thanked him and saw that girl, sun and charlotte there uh-oh i watched behind some bushes and saaw that Sun ditched her. urgh that jerk tch hope he rots in hell.

i thought about leaving then Charlotte looked like she needed to be alone but then i heard sniffling is she crying?

i groaned inside call me a erted jerk or anything like that but one thing im not

its being heartless...

 

_______________BACK TO PRESENT!______

*ATHORS POV*

'hahahaa looks perfect on you!' Charlotte doubled up laughing at Hwa who was pulling faces wearing a monkey mask

'oh yeah you think? well you shouldnt laugh at people' Hwa pouted and put the mask away but turned towards Charlotte with an evil look

'so you should be punished!' Hwa exclaimed and advanced towards Charlote

'b-bwoh?? wait no! stay back im warning you JAE HWA!' she laughed and backed out the shop

'TICKLE TIME!' and hwa began chasing Charlotte

'NO STAY BACK IM NOT JOKING!!!! HAHAHA JAE HWA!'

but hwa just carried on tickling her here and there

'Nope!'

'YAH ERTED JERK!'

'kekeke calling names deserves double punishment!'

the two began to chase each other intill hwa caught her in a corner

'hahaha no escape Park Ying!'

'dont you dare come near me!'

'mwuahaha' Hwa came towards Charlotte and hugged her

'cute couple' they looked up and saw an old lady they seperate

Hwa coughed 'e-er sorry ahjumma'

'you should be you know lying that you dont have anyone' she chuckled and shuffled along

'huh? do you know her hwa?' Charlotte asked

'e-er sort of' Hwa blushed and patted his pocket when the bracelets and took them out

'whats that?' Charlotte tried to look Hwa just smiled and showed her them

'just a cheer-up gift' Hwa took one off and gave it to Charlotte

'really?..... okay who are you? and what have you done with the REAL Jae Hwa?'

'YAH!! im trying to be nice!!'

the two just laughed and carried out the rest of their night

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ForeverInLove: hope you like it we're now gonna reveal the next people in the next update this was just to breifly distract peeps ;D

Kimy: AUUTTHHHOOOORRR!! wheres Charlotte?!?! she hasnt come back T^T

ForeverInLove: she's fine just hanging out with a friend kekeke

Kimy: ??? friend why did you laugh like that? what do you know??!!

ForeverInLove:...........................

Kimy: YAH

Jae Ki: whats going on??

Kimy: ForeverInLove knows something and she wont say!

Jae KI : oh well does she know where Hwa is? i cant find him

ForeverInLove: *innocent whistle*

Kimy: SPIT IT OUT I KNOW YOU KNOW SOMETHING WHERE IS CHARLOTTE AND HWA?!?!

ForeverInLove: i honestly dont know, but just pick people based on their talents okay?

Kimy: what!?!?! your too confusing

JaeKi: lets go look for them

Kimy: yeah *sigh at least we're not hiding something!

ForeverInLove:.............you.....still....owe...me...a...poster >:|

Kimy: o-oh i-i w-was just erm erm BYE! *LEAVES*

ForeverInLove: GET BACK HERE NOW!! * LEAVES*

Jae Ki:............she was happy a moment ago...i swear she is bi-polar.......

annnyywaayyyy THANKS FOR READING

Sun: And dont forget to Comment! but please im sorry i swear i am!

Jae Ki: who are you?? O.O

Sun: ...... er i helped out your brother

Jae Ki: ..... bwoh?

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kekeke okay no more distractions!! we'll reveal the next people dont worry! ^-^ oh and go bug Jangkiomoluvsinfinite now ¬¬ and if you havent heard shes doing another apply thingy so check it out!!

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LeeYEG
#1
Chapter 26: OMG your back!! It's awesome to have you back! Can't wait till the next update!! <3

<3 a character Whois still reading~ lol
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taengyoo
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Chapter 26: Yay! you're back C: Welcome back!
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Chapter 26: haha you're back!! lol funny cuz i never come on aff anymore.
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Happy early birthday XD I'm reading :3 and looking outward to the best update! I shall be waiting! ^^
LeeYEG
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Happy early birthday~~~~ <3 don't give up on writing!!!
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hi C:
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