A Promised Happiness

Description

Every 100 years, 12 children are born under a full moon. These children would each be gifted with a rare special power. 

Because of their power, these children were usually hunted down and fought over by the warring kingdoms of the world. 

The powers ranged in strength but the rarest and most prized were those that controlled nature's elements.

Like nature, these powers were strong but more importantly, turbulent and dangerous.

The children that possessed these were used as weapons but because of their strength, they were also feared and therefore isolated from the rest of the world.

 

In the year of the dragon, the powerful kingdom of Exo was blessed and one of these special children was born into the royal family.

Though it wasn't a child of nature, his power was useful and had the ability to become just as powerful.

But they still needed more, they needed a child of nature to use in their upcoming conquests.

They searched and pillaged the villages in their kingdom for years and finally they found him, a child of lightning.

The rarest and most dangerous of the powers, the child could not only control lightning but could generate that raw power through his hands.

To control him, they forced the child to wear a special set of gloves throughout his life and kept him locked up in the palace, using him only to torture and kill their enemies. 

 

Born Kim Jongdae, but renamed Chen by his masters, the lightning child lived his days in darkness, imprisoned in the giant palace. 

People feared and avoided him and he only saw death and pain everyday.... death and pain that he caused.

Slowly as he grew up,he became numb to the screams and pain that he felt in his heart every time he used his power.

He learned to turn off his emotions but there was one thing he couldn't stop wanting no matter how hard he tried....... freedom.

 

He'd had given up hope long ago if not for Luhan, the other gifted child.

An unexplainable force drew them to each other, however just like night and day, they were complete opposites.

The darkness that loomed in Chen's heart was mirrored by the brightness in Luhan's.

The pain that Chen's power brought to the world equaled the joy and pleasure that Luhan's did.

Slowly but surely, Luhan started to take away a bit of Chen's pain and melted a heart that was long thought dead.

He showed him glimpses of the outside world and the ever-abundant happiness that was present around them.

He told him stories about the wonder's of the world and brought laughter and light to Chen's dark world.

He also gave Chen something that no one else had given him. He gave him...

                                                                                                                       A Promised Happiness.

Foreword

A BIG BIG thank you to Cherish0718Corner for the beautiful poster! You guys should def. visit the store! The 25th Hour G r a p h i c s ❞ ft. CHEN

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/522076/the-25th-hour-g-r-a-p-h-i-c-s-ft-chen-open-graphics-kpop-poster-request-you-exo-chen

Authors note:

OMG this is the luchen that I was talking about in my other story! Eeeppsss! I'm so excited about it but so so nervous because i don't

want to mess this up! This was my first OTP so it will always hold a special place in my exo heart. 

I was actually planning to make this a one shot (maybe a two shot) because there is no way I think I could do this story justice if I

started a long chaptered fic while doing my other story. BUT since I love my readers I want to hear your opinions! Do you think I

should make this another long chaptered fic? or stick with my one/two shot idea? It's going to be angsty because i'm a terrible

person and I only think of angsty stories... sigh.

I know some readers like to read shorter stories that go to the core of the relationship so please let me know! If I write the one/two

shot it's going to take place near the end of the story hahaha so you know the drama and angst will be abundant! 

 

Hopefully you guys like the description! let me know what you think!!

 

<3

 

 

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mikazuki_angel #1
Chapter 3: We will all wait for your updates. Have a happy holiday and have a Happy New Year! Alright take care. ^^

<3
KyuXiuSoo
#2
Chapter 3: Awwww~! That's really sad :(
But okay! I'll just be patient and support your choice ^^
Cookiez_123 #3
Chapter 3: I'll wait for you to update^^ happy holidays and hwaiting author nim^^
chizu_ya #4
Chapter 3: i'll wait untill u continue this story ^^
happy holiday to you too.... :)
oh-tea-twelve #5
Chapter 2: poor innocent jongdae was clueless when they took him away from his home at an early age, of course he would seek for his for warmth, for his mother, he didnt even understand his power, what he was capable of completely >¦:'< *hugs lil dae*
luchen's first meeting was adorable though in a way, they were so innocent and childlike(well of course they're still kids xD), luhan tried hard to cheer jongdae up even when he knew of his limit *pats luhan* he did a good job
i am hoping that luhan will get to improve and overcome his limitations(the sky is the limit after all) so that those who looked down upon him will change their minds
and ugh zitao and yifan both sure have dark characters here *shivers*
i wonder if sehun is that crown prince of shu..? if so will he be of an important character here? GAAAH so curious c::
till the next update
JIAYOU! ::D
<3

(I swear i commented this earlier haha must've forgotten to click post ^^)
mikazuki_angel #6
Chapter 2: I like the background story. It just means that Luhan really cares for Jongdae. Oh man, the royal brothers can be so rude and just ignorant. Tao, I kinda want to just zap him like a fly zapper, knock him out and hopefully that fried some brain cells, clearing any type of memory so he won't remember who he is. Yeah, I always see Kris as the authority figure, and since he's so feared over, I'm sure he's gonna be a tyrant. Lay seems normal, or is there something behind him too that we don't know yet?

Luhan was at par when he knocked Tao off the seat! ^^ I just hope that Chen will be okay after the whole ordeal because Luhan is going to help him, I just kinda have a feeling...lol

It's fine, take your time. It is hard to write two stories at the same time. //nod// Will try to wait patiently for the next update then.

<3
kpoployalty00
#7
Chapter 2: wowo.... heartless YiFan have arrived ~!!

how can they do that to Chen??? btw,,, thanks for the capter author-nim ~!! can' wait for the next chapter...

P.S Sehun is the prince of The Shu Kingdom right?
paperapples
#8
Chapter 1: 238?! Damn that's too many and Jongdae is still young DX how could they?!
Are there other princes aside from Tao and Luhan? I hope they're not as cruel and heartless as Tao.

Luhan! Yes, be the light of Jongdae! :)
First chap was okay! Can't wait for the next one! Kkkk
P.S. Luhan's a meanie for tripping Bai Xian :P
paperapples
#9
Chapter 1: 238?! Damn that's too many and Jongdae is still young DX how could they?!
Are there other princes aside from Tao and Luhan? I hope they're not as cruel and heartless as Tao.

Luhan! Yes, be the light of Jongdae! :)
First chap was okay! Can't wait for the next one! Kkkk
P.S. Luhan's a meanie for tripping Bai Xian :P