If Only

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If only we were still together.
If only we were still the old us.
If only we were still young.
If only we never separated.
If only you were still here.

 

If only...

 

I would still be happy.

 



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Foreword

 


 

"I, Byun Baekhyun, take you, Park Soohyun, to be my lawfully wedded wife, to have and to hold, from this day forward, for better, for worse, for richer, for poorer, in sickness or in health, to love and to cherish 'till death do us part."

 

"I, Park Soohyun, take you, Byun Baekhyun, to be my lawfully wedded husband, to have and to hold, from this day forward, for better, for worse, for richer, for poorer, in sickness or in health, to love and to cherish 'till death do us part."

 


 

What happened to us Soohyun-ah? Whatever happened to the words we uttered at the altar? What happened to all those promises that I thought we would never break? What happened to you, Soohyun-ah? What caused you to change your mind?

 


Trailer by jo-lene of ⋄ Fιcτιoη's Trαηcε ⋄.



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A contest entry for • Passing Time • Writing Prompt Challenge.

Prompt: The way things should've been.



Beta-reader: anjali17737



Special thanks to almahonggi99 of ▸▸ Panda's Crown™ Graphics ♛

for the awesome graphics.

baeeeya
Aww~ sad news, Muffin. If Only didn't win the contest. But, still! At least it's very much appreciated by you guys. That's good enough for me. :)

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AMahardhi
#1
Chapter 1: Like usual, you amaze the hell out of me. So sad... I only read the ending part of this story because it just 7 in morning here and I don't want to look ugly puffy baby so early in front of my family. But that is useless because I am still criying... freakin' cry.
Oh... the perk of being angst lover :'(

Fighting
Primardya #2
Chapter 1: it's really sad that the story ended like this.
I really cried that the whole story turned out to be sad ending.
I really like your stories author-nim and would appreciate to wait for your another great stories
diajengftr #3
Chapter 1: Heart-breaking story<''3
sukianna #4
Chapter 1: I love unacceptable ending but I hate when ending goes like this... Oh world , if you love him why bother lie to him.. Lastly, I guess those in real situation know better. Still this story is beautiful one ~~~
baek_up
#5
Chapter 1: I know theres something fishy when Baek said Soo became thinner and her pale skin, etc. The ending is totally the opposite from what I'd imagine when I read the foreword ;o;


I'm really a fan of your stories now
lucidhoney10
#6
Chapter 1: This story were just so sad…
Why do a lovely couple had to separated in such painful way?
I never into sad ending story because I can't bear to even imagine two loving couple suffer because losing part of their life; part of them. And this story just…
But I never regret reading this story though since this story is just so well written and even its content somewhat more realistic… Telling us to be more realistic as there's no such fairy tale like life in this cruel world.
You amaze me author-nim... you always do. Great one! Can't get enough of your story. ;)b
Jindos21
#7
Chapter 1: daebak .
nandaniptr
#8
Chapter 1: WHOAAAAAH THIS ONESHOT IS SUCCESSFULLY MADE ME CRY. this story is so beautiful yet so angsty too omg authornim
it reminds me with 10080 but not too similar. you have your own differences but in the end i still endup crying;''''(
haaaaaa, keep the goodwork!