Epilogue: Part 2

Take it to the Next Level

Epilogue: Part 2

(Flashback)

Mimi stood in a room down the hallway from her alcove.  Listening closely, she heard Zico send the men who had delivered the diamonds away.  She listened to their footsteps die away and slowly stepped from the room and headed back to the alcove.

“Mimi, you there?”

She leaned against the wall and folded her arms over her stomach as he grabbed the briefcase containing the diamonds.  “I really hope you know what you’re doing, Zico,” she said.  She was genuinely concerned about him, but more importantly, her own life was riding on his success as well.  She was so close to getting out of this wretched life. 

Zico, being his cocky self, turned to her and held his hands wide, one of them holding the handle of the case.  “Baby,” he said with a smirk.  “I’m the leader of Block B.  I always know what I’m doing.”

Mimi snorted and unfolded her arms but didn’t grace that retort with a comment. 

“I really wish you’d let us pay you for helping us this time,” Zico added, dropping his arms.

“Pissing PD Tran off Is enough of a payment,” Mimi said.  “We’ll all be glad when he’s gone.” Which would be sooner than Zico knew.

Zico surprised her by stepping forward and wrapping an arm around her waist.  He pressed a quick kiss to her cheek before she could say anything.  “You are the best, sweetheart.”

Without another word he took off down the hall.  Mimi watched him go with a hand pressed to her cheek.  “He’s going to get himself killed one of these days,” she said with a sigh.  “Leader of Block B, yeah right.” 

With a smile, she turned and picked up the phone.  She dialed a number and then looked up and down the hall to make sure she was alone.

“Yeah?” The feminine voice at the other end of the line was short. 

“Show is on the road,” Mimi said, and then hung up.  Still smiling, she began to hum to the music playing and set about organizing her supplies.  Her job was over and she wasn’t required to be anywhere for a while yet, so she decided to take her time.  She might miss her little alcove when she was in Korea.  She knew she would never want to come back, but this space was hers when so little else had been for as long as she could remember.  She sighed.

And then she stood when pounding footsteps approached.  The two suited men who had dropped off the diamonds had returned.  Something had gone wrong.

“Where’s the man that was just here?” the shorter man shouted at her in Vietnamese. 

Mimi shook her head and cowered a little.  “He just took off,” she answered, playing innocent.

The men cursed and then took off down the hall.  Mimi stepped out of the alcove and watched them until they had turned a corner far down the hall.  Once they were out of sight, she ran back to the phone to call Mai again.

“Something went wrong.”

 

“Did you find out how those guys knew something was up?”  Zico asked.  “I thought we had covered all our bases.”

“I thought you had too,” Mai admitted and sighed.  “But no, I didn’t figure out what clued them in.  It shall remain a mystery.”  And boy did that irritate both of them

Zico scowled and rubbed a hand over his face.  “Mimi wasn’t the only one keeping an eye on us,” he said, moving on.  “You had Hana working at Taeil’s shop too.”

Mai smiled.  “That wasn’t part of my plan, though it ended up being for the best.  Hana had all the paperwork together that we needed, and she didn’t really have anything else to do.  She was bored and bothering me so I sent her to check out the shop that Taeil had bought.  She decided to take it a step further and offered to work for him.”

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BookWormNerd #1
Chapter 21: I would love to have a sequel to this one! I suggest to go into the back stories of each member of Block B of how they go into the gang ^^ mostly Taeil, since he's my bias :D
Fan_of_Karma
#2
Hello :) I'd like to inform you that your story has been nominated for Best Psychological Thriller at World of Literature 2014 Fanfiction Awards. You may find us here: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/748372
Have a nice day! Karma~
MissChie
#3
Chapter 20: ^^... What should i say...
haha..
this story is so original... and it's just like reading an extended version of the short less than 4 minutes MV. LOL~~
i finished this story in just a few hours...
It's interesting and you are doing a great job making me laugh at certain scenes. Good Work!! The scene where Zico asks who was steering this 'thing' is the most hilarious. Judging at Kyung, i know exactly what u r trying to tell... Haha...

The chapters goes back and forth which confuse me a little (i mean the flashbacks and then the currents situation). But that was just a minor things to be bothered of.

I think you just did a good job~~~
Congratulation.
Sorry taking your space for this long comment haha...

Write more Block B's stories... It's my 'responsibility' to subscribe to 'em... huhu...
_Kyung
#4
Chapter 20: Wow, I really can't say how you did amazing on your writing!
The mv is really well transcribed. As Kyung is my ultime bias, I can't help to feel a little jealous thought, haha! But of course it was his fault the briefcases were exchanged, it's always his fault!

No but seriously, you really did an amazing work, I can't wait to read other stuff from you ^^
Thank you for writing this amazing story :)
ImpossibleBiasLists
#5
Chapter 20: This is a very well-written story, and I love that you played with the order of events. It was easy to keep track of, because of the MV, but I still enjoyed reading this a lot, and your interpretation of events is very clever. Heh, the girls' roles in this were also really good~ everything suddenly makes sense! (Lol, of course it was Kyung)

Thanks for writing this!
chocolakay #6
Chapter 20: What was up with guns, today, yes Ying. I know right? every guns appearing in nilili mambo is being ridiculous, they didn't throw bullets!

well, hungry clumsy kyung, chicken, and youngil is equals not good. yes zico, get angry to your bestie!

lan and jaehyo is veeeery alike. how can I not shipping them instantly!

well, i love this story! and the ending needs a sequel! i demand a sequel!
ShinhwaStar #7
You story is gread! Good work, keep up with it!
Tierbanre
#8
Chapter 6: So, I'll try to write this in english, but it's kinda difficult for me xD
Anyway, I can understand the whole text, but I can't write a simple comment, yeah.

I just think this story is really awesome, I had to stop reading because I need to sleep, but ''dude'', I love it... so good.

'A thought stuck him and he frowned. He looked from B-Bomb sitting with him at the table to Jaehyo at the stove to P.O, Taeil, and U-Kwon standing at the stairs. If the six of them were all down here… “Who’s steering this thing?” He asked, harshly cutting off Jaehyo’s rant. “Please don’t tell me you gave Kyung the wheel.”' I laughted so hard.

Y sí, soy de España, un saludo :3
chocolakay #9
Chapter 8: well, the last word is the key. whoops. hahahaha.....

this is my favorite part of the mv, and in this fic too.