My Bottled Soul

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A girl's soul.
A beclouded boy.
Will their lives intertwine?
Or will their lives pass right by eachother and not even know it?

Foreword

hi bottled_jar here. This is for all the Yamaki fan out there. I hope you
find this entertaining.

This is just a one shot. It may seem similiar to my other pieces of work. but this one has names and has a little bit more detail. I hope you understand what I wrote and what happens in the end. I don't own any of the people in this. I just write about them.

This happens to be my first official fanfic. so feel free to critique. any kind of feedback would be sufficient.

You can actually subsitute their names to your favorite couple. they just happen to be my favorite if-couple. it can be anyone.

 

Copyright. © 2010 Emily.

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lovly39 #1
It's too early to tell where this story is going but I'm expecting greatness! ^^ Don't disapoint me!
lovly39 #2
"It may seem similiar to my other pieces of work."????? I'VE NEVER READ ANYTHING LIKE THIS! :D It seems so deep already! Hehe I love the bottled soul concept! Keep it up and update soon! I'm looking forward to it!
bottled_jar #3
thank you. yes thanks to you, commentators. I think I'll be uploading chapter 2. I wasn't too sure on whether or not I would or wouldn't post it up. or rather have it an incomplete story for a while. I haven't set my eyes on it since I last edited it. which was a month ago. XD
VMMJ90 #4
HEY..nice! it's like a poem and a story all at once. it was good. i never looked at jars/bottles tat way before.
Jindiy #5
this is great! I so love your writing! ^^
PoshTeen #6
that was....simply BEAUTIFUL. i felt everything yamapi was feeling..goodness me, your writing has a lot of emotion in.<br />
it's fanfics like these that are rare to find, like a needle in a haystack. it was PERFECT! i can't find a single flaw in this.<br />
we need more fanfics like these in AFF.<br />
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anyway, thank you for sharing this story :)
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