Oh hey, It's me again xD I just came here to tell you that I'm your fan *^*
you are one of my favorite writers ;A;
keep feeding me with taeny :')❤

Chapter 1: For your first fic this is quite alright.
Overall you had a story in mind and its plot was thick enough to keep me entertained, thin enough without too much dramas.
I think its great because u're sort of writing this based on someone, no wonder its like u're trying to tell this story to someone since the beginning~ i was right :P

You had the perfect plot, but would've been great if u put in more details.
Taeyeon was supposed to be mean since that's what Fany thought, u could put in some negative habits to portray her personality more, before going all out perfect-girlfriend ^___^
I wished their first night was longer, that was my favorite part!
The ending was nice and sweet, again i wish there's more cheeeeeeeessseeee~

Great fic, wished it was longer cause i enjoyed it :D

Chapter 1: More more please so good