i will take the sun into my mouth

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to keep a promise is to fulfill two wills.

 

 

 

 

Foreword

a/n: okay! super last minute, but i've tried writing this fic three/four times and this is what i've ended up with u___u also, i really like Jonghyun/Krystal? (probably because i am completely biased)  kind of When Harry Met Sally based. just a warning, i use Krystal and Soojung interchangeably throughout the fic!

 

for pinboo's Treat Me a Fic semi-contest.

 

 

rated for mild language.

 

 

 

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sleepylips #1
Chapter 1: Beautiful, I love it.
Kaosuhime #2
Chapter 1: It's been, like, 6months since I read this but OMG I'm still so in love with this story. Wow, I just really liked the way you wrote it out of order but it's so purposeful and reveals something new every time. I wrote a story to try this out but wOW it's so much work /sobs.
Don't mind me, I'm just going through all your wonderful stories and doing the comments I should've a long time ago haha <33
Krystalocked #3
Chapter 1: Oh. That's.....Uh, let me think....I can't find great fitting word for this. Amazing? Awesome? Perfect? Incredible? No, It's more than this. It's...just like a feeling. So real, so coherent, absolutely one of the best I've ever known.
Krystalocked #4
Chapter 1: It's really lovely. So wonderful. I'm speechless. One of the Best I've ever known. You're awesome.
forevernever #5
Chapter 1: This story. seriously. I don't even know these characters beyond their name and group but you managed to flesh complete personalities and lives in so few words (I feel like it's a lot longer than it actually is.) The part about "depression by association" struck me so much and then the story was over, so I immediately had to reread it.
Eternally jealous of you people who can write distinctly and beautifully. The way you structure this story and just the writing style- it's so breathtaking. Sometimes, people take it a bit too far with this type of angst/slice-of-life; they write too flowery, make too many metaphors, overcompensate. But this is so nicely rooted in reality, and the poetry is gorgeous, and when I'm done, I just want to sit there and kind of soak up the plot and characterization and let it seep in, if that makes any sense. Actually, I don't know if this comment makes any sense at all, but this story was just fantastic.
crystalmilkshake #6
Chapter 1: i've fallen in love with your writing, author-nim. :D the descriptions and the writings with the year issues really made my mind shuttered from the pleasure of reading. this story suits the reality life as well, perfectly. the poem is a nice match for the storyline and i immediately fell in love. by any chance, i would like to have known of the poem's tributary. where did you get that poem? or any poems. any websites or books you recommend for such kind of a realistic poem. :) i'll continue to read and hope more from you.
Maru-nyan #7
This was really lovely. I really enjoyed how you made the text look and the fact that you made the dates all over the place, but what I loved most was how you showed someone broken and tired finally get what they want. All in time.
chimerically #8
Words cannot describe how much I loved this story; it's definitely made it on its way to my favorites list. Keep up the good work, and I hope to see more of your beautiful stories in the future.
mountaine #9
Chapter 1: i don't have a sense of word connection but i think the title had a mysterious sense to it, it probably should come out as a metaphor. i like the obstacle of time, people, and life itself toying with fate until they see each other at the end of it all, with the warmth of the sun coming out as something bright ahead of them :) i just love this pairing and i absolutely love this story.
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