[Un]Broken Promise
Description
"I promised to give her better life and family before. But I only gave her pain."
If only he knew it before. He would never said those promise to her.
Even he is not decent to say those words to her. What kind person he is. He is the most want criminal.
“Saehyun a, let's leave this orphanage! I'll give you better house and family with me. I'll protect you this time."
This [un] broken promise cannot be taken back.
"Please forget me, Saehyun a. Erase all of our memories together from your mind."
Foreword
Hello, *wave* yes this is my first official story. ^^
I knew maybe someone ever read this story. Yes, I posted it here before, the past one is titled A Weary Heart.
But this is the upgrade one. I re-edit my story, plot, and character. This one is longer than the one shot one.
Enjoy it, and share your thought about this fic to me. I would love to hear it. ^^
Mei
Let's dream and make it real.
STORY REVIEW By jongstal4eva
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Title (2/5)
Appearance (5/5)
Foreword & Description (8/15)
Characters (10/15)
Plot (15/20)
Flow (7/10)
Language (10/20)
Enjoyment (6/10)
Total (62/100)
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