Intertwine with Mine

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To express my deepest affection of my Baekyeol feels..

Foreword

 

 

Destiny and fate stumbled upon both men, crossing each other’s path,

when none of them realizing they’re bound to meet to satisfy their desires…

 

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Trying for the first time in here. My first ever story in AFF.

Hoping I'll do well. :)

xoxo,

ziammmmm

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deelau #1
Chapter 1: I am the first one to comment /dances/

Though it was a short chapter, you have introduced a bit of the personalities of the main characters, how they reacted in a certain situation.

And this is how I understood the characters:

Baekhyun is friendly, giving his jacket to a person he just met dahil alam niya kasalanan niya kung bakit naabala si Chanyeol. Baekhyun is the guy that you would really feel bad when you know you've hurt his feeling since you know he is a good guy.

Chanyeol, here in this chapter, is the guy that you know, might sometimes do and say things that might hurt someone else's feelings but you know he is a good person. That is there is more to him that you'll later find out. In this case, Baekhyun will later find out.

(PS: Konting moments land nila ung alam ko. One of the popular pairings sila sa EXO, diba?)
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