Chapter 9: Your idea for this story is great, i admit it. But to be honest, you seem like in a rush when you wrote this. Too fast for my liking tho. If you done it a lil bit slower, it'd turn out better. 24 is too short, maybe 70 or more will make your story better
Chapter 25: Omg omg this was amaziiinnnggg!! I knew cam was ira! And I was suspicious of mari being the daughter cus it would b too random to just put her randomly in the story. But seriously author-nim this was one of tge best stories ever thank you!!!
Chapter 25: OH MY!!! I just loved this amazing story!
I really did!
It was just perfect!
On my favourites lis! :D
You did amazingly well author-nim. Thank you for writing such a good story. <3
Keep going with the great writing skills!
Chapter 25: I KNEW SHE WAR IRA!!!!! I loved this story so much, it was very interesting! I hope you will continue to make stories as interesting as this one! :D
Chapter 23: OH MY GOD!!!
Luhan is going to kill her! :O I'm sure he won't. I know that he likes her and those feelings will stop the act.
I so love this story!!!
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