When everything is falling apart

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Eli and Kevin had a long relationship full with lust, passion and love. More love than everybody here can imagine. But what happens when all that love just fade away? What happens when the person you love is not by your side anymore? What happens when Kevin is left alone but with his pain? It comes more pain. Until the moment he can not take it anymore.

Foreword

~Flashback~

The two boys were now laying on the bed, cuddling and trying to catch their breath. Sweat was rolling down their foreheads and cheeks, their bodies was on fire, full with passion. They had made love. Yes, love. Not just , but love.

"Kevin" the blond muscular boy said, looking the skinny boy right in the eyes. Kevin smiled when he heard his name, and his hazelnut brown eyes somehow shined with happiness. A smile formed on his soft lips as he answered with his angelic voice. "What is it Eli?"

"I love you" Eli said simply. But in these three words was collected all his love. More love than anybody can expect. Pure love that it seems to last forever. He loved Kevin with all his heart, he was ready to do everything for him even to die. Also, he was doing anything to protect him and  to make him happy. Because he was deeply in love with him.

Kevin wanted this moment never to end up. He was feeling so good in Eli's strong arms, he was feeling good when Eli was kissing him. He was feeling happiness, warmth and protection.

"I love you too. Actually I love you more" replied Kevin, as he kissed Eli to shut his mouth up because otherwise Eli is going to argue with him that it is not true and that he loves him more. Athough Kevin really loved that kind of arguing with Eli. The kiss was not passionate like the others they shared just a few minutes ago. Now it was slow and full with love.

After breaking the kiss the two boys closed their eyes and fell asleep almost immediately. 

~End of flashback~

Another flashback flew around Kevin's mind making his heart skip a several beats. The pain was building bigger with every single minute and he was feeling that he can not take it any longer.

"Why?!" He screamed as the tears rolled down on his cheeks.

 

 

A/N: Hello everyone, this is my first story in english (actually I can say that it is my first story at all because i have one more story only and it is more like draft but anyway). As you already thought I am not fluent in english so I want to say sorry for the grammar mistakes I made (and I am going to make in future). Also, I do not define myself as a good writer so I want to say sorry for that too. I decided to make it as one-shot. So look forward it! I will do my best to write a good story for all of you. ^_^

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FutureDreamer
#1
Chapter 1: U didn't fai! But, I do request something! Can u make an after story to this one? Like, in Eli's POV at the funeral and whatnot! U know, just his thoughts and regrets (if he has any)!
hasanaheart
#2
Chapter 1: I'm a bit confused with the ending. Eli also committed suicide?? Kevin is dead right? it's a good story, author-nim! ^^
Noona-nomu-yepo123 #3
Chapter 1: OMG im crying so much right now. i loved it! It was so sad tho but i loved it either way :-)
Noona-nomu-yepo123 #4
This sounds interesting. update soon :-)