Shaky Ground

Description

Fantasy!AU, Kaisoo, Hunhan, side!Baekyeol

 The country is at war and every war needs heroes. Kai is the hero of his age, but has a mind of his own which makes him dangerous. When he digs deep enough and unravels the truth about things that should have been kept hidden, there seems to be little more important than his death.

 Do Kyungsoo is a very average villager who craves to escape the mediocrity and pettiness but needs that one final push.

 Also features a naive and conceited heir Oh Sehun, greedy and faithless mercenary Lu Han, mysterious and morally ambiguous Zhang Yixing, eccentric dragon breeder Kris and others.

Foreword

Hi there!

I am new here and this is my first fanfic ever!
It's heavily insipred by the Game of Thrones, Skyrim and the Snow Queen and aside from the fact that it's about the amazing Exo boys, it's meant more as a writing practice. English is not my first language and I'm really trying to improve, so if you spot a grammar mistake or a wrong use of word or anything like that, please don't hesitate to tell me!
I would also appreciate any feedback, constructive criticism, anything you have, comment away!

Thank you so much for reading,

Onion

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JasMackarty #1
Chapter 8: Hey! This story's super old n u'ad probably not even see this comment now, but still....this was super interesting!!
It was really well written with just the right pace, not too rushed not too slow. The plot n the characters have been going really good n they seem pretty realistic n nothing sugar coated.
Just wanna say, thanks for writing...till wherever u've written this I.e. 💗
LittleBrat #2
Chapter 8: Yaaaaaaaaaaay!!♥ An update!♥
Oh God Jongin's gonna confess! KYAA! >o<♥

And Lulu's searching for him... Meanie ;_;

I hope Jongin's gonna confess and tell Kyungsoo who he really is... Perhaps Kyunggie'll follow him & Grey?

Anyways, Update soon & Fighting~!!!♥
MeiXiah #3
Chapter 8: Omfg yes you've updated!!! I feel bad for Jongin since he has to choose between freedom and duty ;^; he should confess to Kyungsoo so at least a part of his burden is unloaded from his shoulders! And I don't like how Luhan is so close to Jongin (I bet that as him rummaging through Jongin's stuff) and I'm just gonna hope that Jongin recovers quickly. And the healer's back? What will happen to Kyungsoo??? Can't wait for the next update >w<
LunnaSeohee #4
OMG U UPLOADED YAAAAAAAAAY
suzika #5
now you have 69 subscribers :>
misstulip #6
Chapter 7: It was nice to see the world from Sehun's point of view. I like his bratty attitude with a spark of curiosity that children have. Sehun is really precious to me here. Definitely my bias! :)
And there is Luhan, mysterious and dangerous assassin. I'm really curious how you develop his topic. And what are his true intentions.
You are doing really good job, each chapter is getting better and better. You maintain a pretty good balance between action and character development, keeping the whole story in suspense, and you do it in such a great style that I read chapters two times, because I can't wait for the next one.I don't know what else to say, I could only praise you. I'm not going to point out any grammar mistakes because my english so bad it hurts. I just want to say I fell in love with this story. Amen. ;)
glitterbiash #7
Chapter 7: OMG, Luhan is so evil, I LOVE IT!!! Huhuhuuu, can't wait for the next chapter! Luhan is supposed to kill Kai, right? So either Sehun is gonna help him or Luhan will join the Sekaisoo crew...or something entirely different will happen and omg I wanna know! I'm dying of curiosity here! Your story is daebak you're daebak and I STILL WANT THE SPOILERS!!! :D
ink_stained_hands #8
Chapter 7: thank you for the update. it made my day ^^
ing #9
Chapter 7: good luck author-nim!!!
your story is really daebakk!
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