Coup d'Etat

Description

He can’t breathe.

He chokes.

He chokes.

Water in his eyes, in his nose, in his mouth.

In his lungs.

In a fuzzy blur, he thinks he can recognize Seungri’s voice screaming his name, somewhere in the distance.

Is this the end?

Foreword

Entry for The Sky is The Limit Writing Competition Round 4, All or Nothing.

Round Table 1: 

Prompt: "she reminded me of the sea; the way she came dancing toward you, wild adn beautiful and just when she was almost close enough to touch she’d rush away again."-glenda millar.

Prompt:"the loneliest moment in somone's life is when they’re watching their whole world fall apart and all they can do is stare blankly"-F.Scott Fitzgerald

Threatening Note.

Open ending.

Dystopian.

 

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victoriousdragon
#1
Chapter 1: DAYUM.

This was epic. Wow. I was so absorbed in this dystopian world you created, and it just feels so real and tangible and it hurts.

Hwaiting with that writing contest! ;3; and yes please to more gri huhuhuhuuu.

* 90 degree bow*
MessyPeanut #2
Chapter 1: It was impressive. I was amazed. This is really good. I know hoping for happy ending for this story was ridiculous, but I was sad that the ending didn't end... happily. I was crushed.

But seriously.. Why???? huhu... sad T____T
lovefoxx
#3
Chapter 1: This is awesome! It makes me think what i would do if something like that happen...
I really wish that Seungri save Jiyong >_<
You did a great job authornim :)
lordmayko
#4
Chapter 1: Wow, this was amazing, honestly bravo! Great writing style, great plot, beautiful way of depicting tragedy. My heart can't help but ache for Seungri a little.
jongkeyminkey
#5
Chapter 1: Wow. This a ing magnificent.
The feeling is just, simply yet strongly portrayed.
But I just can't stop wondering whether jiyong is dead, and refusing to acknowledge the possibility of it, and yeah, the happy ending in which Seungri saved him and they run, and run, and run, and kiss, and made love again, and hiding together outside that messy war.

Lol. I'm so desperate I made my own ending.

ps: I love the scene, I could see them being needy hot mess and desperate like I am.

Please keep on writing GRI.
Love u xoxo