.La Neko Review and Beta Shoppe.- [open]

Description

.Welcome to La Neko's Review && Beta Shoppe!. 

 

Welcome to my humble review and beta shoppe! 

 

Do you want : 

  • honest feedback on your story? 

  • to know if your story is appealing and/or interesting? 

  • help fixing your grammar mistakes, flow and/or organization? 

 

Well, you've come to the right place! 

 

I introduce you to the sole reviewer/beta(?) of La Neko Review && Beta, me! 

 

Reviews:I promise to : 

  • be strict and give constructive criticism for all reviews. 

  • be unbiased. 

  • be completely honest whilst giving a review. 

 

Betas:I promise to : 

  • help fix grammatical errors. 

  • give honest and constructive feedback when/if requested. 

  • give ideas, etc when/if requested. 

 

Reviews:Rules : 

  • subscribe. please don't unsubscribe or you'll be put on the black list. 

  • please credit me and this shoppe in your description and foreword. 

  • please do not bash. like I said, I'm completely honest and strict whilst giving a review. 

  • please be patient. I'm the sole reviewer and along with this shoppe, I'm juggling my own stories, school and sports. 

  • please comment after you pick up your review. i'd really like to know your thoughts on them so I can improve and whatnot.  

  • you can request for a review more than once. I'd be really honoured. 

 

Beta:Rules : 

  • subscribe. please don't unsubscribe or you'll be put on the blacklist 

  • please put me as a co-author once I'm appointed your beta. 

  • please do not bash! if you ask for feedback, I'll be giving you my honest thoughts. 

  • please be patient. like I said, I'm the sole reviewer and along with this shoppe, I'm juggling my own stories, school and sports. 

 

FAQ : 

  • I'm fluent in English. 

  • I'm currently attending secondary school. 

  • I'm normally on the honour roll; English being one of my best subjects. 

  • the longest it'll take me to complete a review will be a month if it's chaptered and I have many requests, otherwise it will take me up to two weeks. 

  • I can beta 5 stories at a time at the most. 

 

Alright! After reading all that, I hope you decided to request! 

 

Please comment below! 

Reviews/Betas:Form : 

 

Review/Beta? : 

Username: 

Profile Link: 

Story Title: 

Story Link: 

Genre: 

Warnings (Rated//Yuri//etc.): 

Comments and/or requests: 

 

If you're looking for a beta, please send me a friend request as well! 

 

Affililates: (comment below/inbox me!)

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Foreword

.Rubric.

 

 

 

 

 

Title  /10 : 

-is it unique and eye-catching?

 

 

Description/Foreword  /10 : 

-does it have just the right amount of detail?

-does it give away the ?

-is it too vague?

 

 

Plot/Storyline  /20 :

-is it unique?

-is it interesting?

 

 

Characters  /10 :

-are they well thought out and planned?

-are they unique?

 

 

Grammar /10 : 

-is everything spelt correctly?

-are periods, commas, semi-colons, etc. in the right places?

-are there any run-ons or incomplete sentences?

 

 

Flow /10 : 

-is it easy to follow or do i get lost while reading?

-can i understand what's happening?

 

 

Organization/Layout/Appearance /10 : 

-is it easy on the eyes?

-is the poster relevant?

-is the background relevant and not distracting?

 

 

 

Enjoyment /20 : 

-as a reader, would i subscribe?

-what are my thoughts on the story as a reader and not a reviewer?

 

 

 

Total : /100

- scores over 90 get placed in the hall of fame!

 

 

 

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arinachoi92
#1
Reviews/Betas:Form :

Review/Beta? : Review
Username: arinachoi92
Profile Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/449864
Story Title: Because your love is like the wind
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/773006/because-your-love-is-like-the-wind-bigbang-romance-top-ygfamily-fluffy-origanalcharacter
Genre: Romance
Warnings (Rated//Yuri//etc.): no
Comments and/or requests: the first story i ever posted.simply wanting to know a reader's honest opinion. did it connect to u emotionally? did it make you think back to your own life?


Reviews/Betas:Form :

Review/Beta? : review
Username: arinachoi92
Profile Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/449864
Story Title: Memories
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/791141/memories-bigbang-romance-top-ygfamily-fluffy-originalcharacter
Genre: Romance
Warnings (Rated//Yuri//etc.): no
Comments and/or requests: wanting to know a reader's point of view on my writing style because i once find writing therapeutic but then i started to feel the pressure when i began posting so i was wondering if my style changed from my first story. did it change for the worst or for the better?



thank you!
Nhoxmew
#2
Just wondering if you would like to beta my stories on Google Docs instead of being my co-author? Don't worry if you don't know how. I have instructions and examples so you'll know what to do :)
sophomoric
#3
May I request for a story to be betaed that hasn't officially been posted yet? As in, I have it written out on Google Docs but I don't want to post it yet because I want to be sure of all the details.
inthenightsky_
#4
Review/Beta? : Beta
Username: inthenightsky_
Profile Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/651535
Story Title: Till The End
Story Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/686828
Genre: romance
Warnings (Rated//Yuri//etc.): none
Comments and/or requests: since English is not my first language, I dont really confident with my grammar, so i hope you can fix any grammar mistake. and, i update this story either once or twice a week. Thank you ^^
IDOthoughts
#5
Hi~ 
Review/beta: Beta
Username: IDOthoughts
Profile link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/266010
Story title: Clouds
Story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/528370/clouds-romance-sliceoflife-exo-ocgirl-kyungsoo-dokyungsoo
Genre: slice of life, romance
Warning(rated):
Comments and/or requests:I don't update regulary, but usually 1 time every one or two week if I'm not busy with school :3 I have most problems with comma and all those things, since we have some other rules in Danish <.<